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428kb

cool map

how did it happen xd

I jumped to go back and fell there 🙁

I jumped to go back and fell there 🙁

i fix it tomorrow and i forgot to add more time cps

add more time cps

add changelog

If the file doesn't have a changelog, the file wasn't uploaded to the servers.

add more time cps

this without entities is achaos mark when the direction change

here dont need the bullet u can hook the hookable and use dj to reach laser

if you hook up u skipp all the "gore" and get insta unfreeze

and i found a skip so random but i think is better fix to prevent tas skips if u start and hook here u can slide from block and fall here is hard but if u tas this can rob 1s of map

Well, this is practically one of the maps already created.

getting laser and getting height from 1x1 is awkward and doesnt match rest of the map

whole section is boring

why are the speeders even needed for this part? it doesnt make it harder its just like you artificially made the swing space wider.

and it doesnt even matter if you hook or do anything on the way back, it just auto-wins

i know this map is mostly optional for laser but why isnt it forced here? you can just extend the freeze floor right

only spot i like

bullet is completely optional. you can just swing and use dj at the bottom.

boring

you dont even have to do this whole gores, dj just skips half since you put unfreeze under it.

kinda just annoying at the end since nothing else really forces the move, but u can ofc get more speed

overall this idea is not bad but its just sorta boring at points. i think you would benefit from forcing the laser more, or maybe making some harder parts with tele

might just be me, but the beginning was much harder than the end

also, no need for laser to be taken away, none of the gameplay after it except for regaining the laser requires it anyway. If the moving lasers were kept as freezes, it would be better imo

door #2 doesn't make sense and is just annoying for speedrunners

i think having laser for the whole map makes it more enjoyable. if you actually forced laser for all parts then i can see reasons to take it away, but whole map is sorta "meh do whatever you want"

1. The way to hold the laser is kind of meh; a 2x unfreeze would be more comfortable.
2. This is the only part of the map that's completely cramped; it's kind of bad, honestly.
3. The switch is kind of meh, you just touch it and it comes back. It would be better if you designed a part with a laser to pick up the switch instead of removing it.
4. The bullet point is preventing you from getting the speedup; you could remove the bullet point and do what I said in point 3. That would be better. / Instead of having an unfreeze to pass through, you can make a part to use the laser.
5. simple part

IMO the only bad thing in 2 is the awkward drop at the end, the rest is fine

I hate 1.

https://tenor.com/view/cat-kitty-kitten-angry-mad-gif-16754054616247640902

The rest is really fine, but maybe if he could put something new in its place, I think it would be better.

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See above tests, this map needs a lot of changes to be releasable.

your entities structure is good though, and enough space is given for moves, so good job with that

try to avoid unnecessary speeders and switches.

if you can do a part move without unnecssary special tiles, you should do that instead

unless the switch / speeder adds substantial value to the part, best to keep it out.

cool part idea, could expand on this to make the spacing and flow better