#runisland
"RunIsland" by WE|Helloguy44 [Brutal]
DDNet 07/06/2020 9:36 PM
@Ra'ks
louis 07/06/2020 9:43 PM

xd

louis 07/06/2020 9:43 PM

way too long

Qywinc 07/06/2020 10:33 PM

delete unused layers (blue)

Qywinc 07/06/2020 10:34 PM

you can finish map in 2sec in t0

Qywinc 07/06/2020 10:34 PM

you can even skip startline

Qywinc 07/06/2020 10:36 PM

design is ok but gameplay is too ez for brutal except maybe 1/2 parts and way to short and nothing real exciting

Qywinc 07/06/2020 10:36 PM

without skip you are able to do this map in like 2min maybe

Freezestyler 07/06/2020 10:38 PM

too short and lack of creativity, your map is supposed to be somewhat special

Qywinc 07/06/2020 10:40 PM

Based on your parts, I would say that you are relatively new or not that good, so your parts lack creativity. Maybe first try to make a novice map before you try a brutal one

Qywinc 07/06/2020 10:41 PM

I think a lot of mechanics in Teeworlds are still withheld from you

Qywinc 07/06/2020 10:42 PM

Maybe playthrough some maps so you can see what is possible in teeworlds, get some ideas and put them in your new own style in a map

Qywinc 07/06/2020 10:43 PM

Most of your parts are just simple hooks, nothing special

Qywinc 07/06/2020 10:46 PM

As I said I would recommend you to playthrough some maps to see how the Teeworlds mechanics work and build smth new out of it. Gain some more experience

Qywinc 07/07/2020 1:57 PM

I talked with mapper and give him some advices to improve.

Qywinc 07/07/2020 1:57 PM

$decline

ur 07/07/2020 4:12 PM

walkisland