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way too long
delete unused layers (blue)
you can finish map in 2sec in t0
you can even skip startline
design is ok but gameplay is too ez for brutal except maybe 1/2 parts and way to short and nothing real exciting
without skip you are able to do this map in like 2min maybe
too short and lack of creativity, your map is supposed to be somewhat special
Based on your parts, I would say that you are relatively new or not that good, so your parts lack creativity. Maybe first try to make a novice map before you try a brutal one
I think a lot of mechanics in Teeworlds are still withheld from you
Maybe playthrough some maps so you can see what is possible in teeworlds, get some ideas and put them in your new own style in a map
Most of your parts are just simple hooks, nothing special
As I said I would recommend you to playthrough some maps to see how the Teeworlds mechanics work and build smth new out of it. Gain some more experience
I talked with mapper and give him some advices to improve.
$decline
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