#RONE
"RONE" by pinfandsj [Moderate]
DDNet 08/17/2023 9:06 AM
@0526pin

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DDNet 08/17/2023 9:06 AM
DDNet 08/17/2023 9:06 AM
b0mf 08/17/2023 10:29 AM

bro

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:29 AM

5mb?

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:29 AM
b0mf 08/17/2023 10:29 AM

bro what

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:31 AM

this noobfilter sucks

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:31 AM

remove it

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:33 AM

first part is badly made and you dont get enough room to rehook

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:33 AM
b0mf 08/17/2023 10:33 AM

you have to edge to be able to get them down

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:44 AM

if this is how this part is intended i like it

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:44 AM

oh i exported the video wrong

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:44 AM

oopsie

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:45 AM
b0mf 08/17/2023 10:45 AM

here

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:45 AM

is this is intended then nice part

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:46 AM

ill play the map fully later but rn it looks like an easy declne

b0mf 08/17/2023 10:46 AM

im sure nova will go more indepth as he is playing currently

nezox1 08/17/2023 10:55 AM

Can delete all unused images, they are marked in blue.

nezox1 08/17/2023 10:56 AM

-1mb i think

0526pin 08/17/2023 11:19 AM

Ok, I forgot to delete

0526pin 08/17/2023 11:25 AM

If it's easy to die, I think I can add a platform where you can stand, and at first I think it's close to the head and can start again after death

0526pin 08/17/2023 11:37 AM

This is the first time I have used Discord,do you have any translation tools?😭 I don't understand what you're saying

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:43 AM

just do googling

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:44 AM

both can go up and it seems faster

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:45 AM

this parts are too faily than other part

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:46 AM

is this intended? (just hook other tee)

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:47 AM

this seems skip (same as above thing)

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:47 AM

both can go down by hammerflying

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:48 AM

you need to make diffrence between unfreeze and undeepfreeze

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:49 AM

this hook feels annoying and hard

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:50 AM

if the player fails, its hard to save

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:51 AM

can throw up, so don't need to go back

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:53 AM

if the player stuck at this place, it is annoying to pull off

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:55 AM

this throw seems hard for moderate player when they loses their rocket

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:57 AM

this part seems need to use bug and the moderate player who don't know this trick will give up

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:58 AM

if the player in here, its hard to hook and pull off

0526pin 08/17/2023 11:59 AM

Change that now

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 11:59 AM

can skip this

0526pin 08/17/2023 12:01 PM

How is that going to get over🧐

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:01 PM

also can skip if above tee shotgun below tee

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:03 PM

is this intended?

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:03 PM

black is hook, circle is tee

0526pin 08/17/2023 12:03 PM

It seems to be,So can I add a little more water?

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:03 PM

other are move direction

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:04 PM

I think yes

texnonik 08/17/2023 12:04 PM
ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:05 PM

kinda messy and its skippable by throwing up

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:05 PM

skip

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:06 PM

faily hookfly at last part?

texnonik 08/17/2023 12:06 PM
0526pin 08/17/2023 12:07 PM

yes

0526pin 08/17/2023 12:07 PM

😀

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:08 PM

imagine fail at last part

0526pin 08/17/2023 12:08 PM

I'm going to fix mine now ...

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:08 PM

make it unfaily or change to hammerfly

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:08 PM

there are many other way to fix, its my opinion

texnonik 08/17/2023 12:09 PM

tf ?

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:11 PM

here it is

texnonik 08/17/2023 12:12 PM

you can also go solo at that place

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:12 PM

yes xd

0526pin 08/17/2023 12:12 PM

Is that okay?

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:12 PM

seems ok now

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:13 PM

but still can skip with 3p~

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:13 PM

3~p*

0526pin 08/17/2023 12:14 PM

Become rare

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:14 PM

you should check all corner

0526pin 08/17/2023 12:14 PM

terrible

0526pin 08/17/2023 12:14 PM

ok1

0526pin 08/17/2023 12:15 PM

I forgot to change it

gazebr 08/17/2023 12:16 PM

Map has a lot of design bugs like this (there is one in basically every screenshot by nova)

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:19 PM

make all the points which unhookable and freeze tiles overlap like htis

b0mf 08/17/2023 12:20 PM

Ez fix for this is to team lock it at 2p

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:21 PM

not that good fix i think

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:32 PM

don't do unfreeze mark spam like this

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:32 PM

its messy

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:32 PM

generic block should be random I think

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:33 PM

use auto rule to solve that problem

0526pin 08/17/2023 12:36 PM

I don't know these, the squares are put one by one😭

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:38 PM

a

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:39 PM

b4 use auto rule you have to seperate unhook and hook block layer

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:39 PM

then click like this

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:41 PM

if you feel the block placed weird, fix it by ur hand

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:44 PM

suggestion of reduce this tile's alpha like this

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:44 PM
ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:45 PM

it's example and u can change

0526pin 08/17/2023 12:51 PM

Thank you so much, there are no people in the country to teach to make maps😭

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 12:52 PM

same for me

0526pin 08/17/2023 1:24 PM

Is the intensity of 4 blocks here kicking the ground?

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 1:30 PM

idk what you mean, but speeder can easily pierce if the player accelerate enough speed

0526pin 08/17/2023 1:51 PM

So now that both of these places need to be changed, I need time to design new levels😫

0526pin 08/17/2023 1:52 PM

Any comments on the whole map?

b0mf 08/17/2023 1:53 PM

i can look through now if u want

b0mf 08/17/2023 1:53 PM

where u from?

0526pin 08/17/2023 1:54 PM

China

b0mf 08/17/2023 1:54 PM

oh i cannot speak chinese

b0mf 08/17/2023 1:55 PM

join the server username "bomf" and we can look through the parts

0526pin 08/17/2023 1:55 PM

It's okay, I can translate

b0mf 08/17/2023 1:55 PM

👍

b0mf 08/17/2023 1:55 PM

u may join now

0526pin 08/17/2023 1:57 PM

Can't get in

b0mf 08/17/2023 1:57 PM

u know password?

b0mf 08/17/2023 1:57 PM

it should be the rus server

0526pin 08/17/2023 1:58 PM

no

b0mf 08/17/2023 1:58 PM

password is: nimrocks

0526pin 08/17/2023 1:59 PM

Stopped here

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:00 PM

hm

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:00 PM

we can try the cn servers

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:00 PM

try now

0526pin 08/17/2023 2:02 PM

No way

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:02 PM

doesnt work for you?

0526pin 08/17/2023 2:03 PM

I don't know why I can't get in

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:03 PM

i also dont know

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:03 PM

i will send stuff about the parts as i do them :D

0526pin 08/17/2023 2:04 PM

Now it's evening in China, I'm going to bed, I'll continue to revise the map tomorrow, thank you for your suggestions today

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:05 PM

i still do not like this noob filter i would recommend changing or removing it

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:05 PM

ok gn ^^

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:05 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:05 PM

you can skip the start line and this part like so

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:06 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:06 PM

this needs to be made bigger / moved up

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:06 PM

as in most places you cannot reach the other tee

0526pin 08/17/2023 2:07 PM

Here you can go directly from below, it will be fast but difficult

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:07 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:08 PM

this part is fine just way too easy

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:08 PM

yes but the issue is that you can do it without touching the start line

0526pin 08/17/2023 2:09 PM

I'll figure it out tomorrow

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:10 PM

no problem

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:10 PM

for this part

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:10 PM

i think you should make what i did intended

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:10 PM

it feels pretty fun to do

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:12 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:12 PM

you can quite easily put both up and skip this part

0526pin 08/17/2023 2:14 PM

Here it turned out to be water on it, and it was necessary to step on the edge, but some people said it was too difficult, so it was changed to a platform

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:14 PM

i dont know what you mean

0526pin 08/17/2023 2:15 PM

This was mentioned above

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:15 PM

ive not read above

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 2:15 PM

yeah I mentioned

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 2:15 PM

lol

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:16 PM

am just saying what i see as i play

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:16 PM

:D

0526pin 08/17/2023 2:16 PM

Here is a change of the problem I know

DDNet 08/17/2023 2:16 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:17 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:17 PM

this may be possible but i dont want to test it rn

ohn0_ 08/17/2023 2:17 PM

too high I guess

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:17 PM

possibly

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:17 PM

im not sure of the max height possible

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:18 PM

outside of that skip idea the part is really boring with nothing to it

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:18 PM

id change it

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:18 PM

same with the next part

0526pin 08/17/2023 2:19 PM

ok

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:20 PM

asking the same question

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:21 PM

i dont like how much youre using the tower hf parts

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:21 PM

its fine over a whole map but 2 parts back to back not so much

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:24 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:24 PM

easy skip on this part also

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:25 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:26 PM

random extra layers of frz idk

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:26 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:26 PM

and frz should not be in any tps

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:26 PM

very whatever part also

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:27 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:28 PM

you can double hammer to skip this block and get more height

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:29 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:29 PM

first half of the part sucks

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:29 PM

second half is nice i dont mind it

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:31 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:31 PM

this part could be cool but rn its not

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:31 PM

plz change it i think theres many ways u could do so

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:32 PM

super easy deep after it

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:32 PM

theres so many ways to avoid the no hammer mechanic easily

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:33 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:33 PM

is this intended?

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:34 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:34 PM

mega faily

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:35 PM

just add a platform and thats an ez fix

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:37 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:37 PM

pretty easy in comparison

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:37 PM

although faily second part u gotta lazer mid throw ig

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:37 PM

in prctice super z

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:37 PM

ez

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:39 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:39 PM

random change to cps makes no sense to me here

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:39 PM
  • boring part
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:41 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:41 PM

same thing as before but easier and more boring

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:42 PM

whole part can be done with 1 hammer

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:43 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:43 PM

this part is fine

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:44 PM

next part is just a bad transition part

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:44 PM

change it or remove

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:44 PM

u can very easily do it solo

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:44 PM

perhaps make it a solo part instead

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:45 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:45 PM

i would not put a hook like this in a moderate map

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:45 PM

they wont know how to do it

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:48 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:48 PM

another very whatever transition part

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:48 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:48 PM

and here

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:49 PM

your cps go 1-2-12-10

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:49 PM

pls fix

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:50 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:50 PM

this here u can hit cp then fall pretty easily

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:53 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:54 PM

i dont quite understand your intentions with this part or why your speeders are set so high that its really annoying to play

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:54 PM

i would recommend you fix/change it

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:55 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:56 PM

another part where ive got no idea how u wanted me to do it

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:56 PM

i did it like so

b0mf 08/17/2023 2:56 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:58 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 2:58 PM

this should be the solo with tps imo

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:00 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 3:00 PM

another part where idk what u wanted

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:00 PM

i assume edge

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:01 PM

im still unsure as to why u swapped to cps and never went back

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:04 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 3:05 PM

is double nade intended here?

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:11 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 3:11 PM

so is this intended?

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:14 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 3:14 PM

not sure what u wanted me to do for either parts so i just did a throw for both

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:19 PM
b0mf 08/17/2023 3:19 PM

u can skip deep pretty ez here

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:20 PM

and then the rest of the map is a bunch of random nothing

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:20 PM

ive already played it for a while i dont really wanna play those parts aswell just incase

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:20 PM

this map is very clearly not going to rls but theres some good parts in here

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:21 PM

i would recommend considering all skips and gameplay when making the next one and ensure all gameplay is good :D

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:21 PM

also the design sucks and the map should definetly not be so big

b0mf 08/17/2023 3:21 PM

ez $decline from me

0526pin 08/18/2023 3:05 AM

Some details were changed, focusing on removing and changing the first part of the underground

DDNet 08/18/2023 3:05 AM
ohn0_ 08/18/2023 3:55 AM

time cps are missing on the map

0526pin 08/18/2023 6:15 AM

What is it

ohn0_ 08/18/2023 6:21 AM

you should put this blocks

0526pin 08/18/2023 7:18 AM

What do you think is missing from this diagram?

gazebr 08/18/2023 7:20 AM

Nova outlined the blocks in red

gazebr 08/18/2023 7:20 AM

Time checkpoints show splits which helps speedrunners see how fast they are going

ohn0_ 08/18/2023 7:21 AM

yes

ohn0_ 08/18/2023 7:21 AM

hardly visible

0526pin 08/18/2023 7:24 AM

I didn't understand this translation

gazebr 08/18/2023 7:37 AM

When you go through a Time Checkpoint you see your time compared to your best run

0526pin 08/18/2023 7:38 AM

Is this it?

gazebr 08/18/2023 7:38 AM

Yes

0526pin 08/18/2023 7:39 AM

Okay, I see

gazebr 08/18/2023 7:41 AM

Place them such that you cant accidentally skip them

0526pin 08/18/2023 8:14 AM

欧克

0526pin 08/18/2023 8:15 AM

OK

0526pin 08/18/2023 8:45 AM
DDNet 08/18/2023 8:45 AM
shengyan1256 08/18/2023 8:55 AM

On the left of the first scene transition. Solution: put water in the grass

shengyan1256 08/18/2023 8:56 AM

In the first scene transition. No corner is placed.

shengyan1256 08/18/2023 8:58 AM

You would better place a corner.

shengyan1256 08/18/2023 8:58 AM

Everywhere. You should place fz in the tiles.

wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:00 AM
wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:01 AM
wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:03 AM

corners

shengyan1256 08/18/2023 9:03 AM

Corner

shengyan1256 08/18/2023 9:03 AM
wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:04 AM
wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:04 AM

corners

wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:04 AM
wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:04 AM
0526pin 08/18/2023 9:05 AM

这里改了

0526pin 08/18/2023 9:05 AM

玩新的捏

0526pin 08/18/2023 9:05 AM

wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:07 AM

I think you need to take a look at your map, the whole map needs to be retextured, there's no need to use one texture for each entity layer.

shengyan1256 08/18/2023 9:08 AM

$waitinG

wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:08 AM
wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:08 AM

skip

wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:08 AM

bp

wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:11 AM

hummm

wartoz_ 08/18/2023 9:27 AM

A very good start. good luck next map🫡

b0mf 08/18/2023 9:45 AM

peak map choice

b0mf 08/18/2023 9:46 AM

i would not bother talking about design for this map really

b0mf 08/18/2023 9:47 AM

the design will be fixed once the gameplay is done ^^ here the design is 6mb and doesnt work at all so

b0mf 08/18/2023 9:47 AM

talking about corners may not be necesary

gazebr 08/18/2023 11:08 AM

bro i didnt know how hard it is to find a video with splits until i needed it xD (cant do myself cuz phone)

b0mf 08/18/2023 11:52 AM

lmao

vena6080 08/23/2023 4:57 PM

tested with nehr gameplay : the map is unbalanced some part are like brutal 3, and some other are moderate 2, many parts are cheatable (40%), i don't know if it's indeed, but speedbug with sg are not good for mapping + i don't know if you forget to put back the collision but all the end of the map (maybe 10% of the map) don't have collision some part are messy, using speeder with blocker, and teleport in wrong way

for design, also some little problem, like Hookthrough not transparent enough... for me and nehr it's clearly a decline

vena6080 08/23/2023 5:00 PM

exemple 1 : to much stopper, and speeders, the cp is useless if you use tele (cp are made for telecp) the part is messy and when you pass 1 tee at rocket you have to go back to teleport too give the rocket to the 2nd player (rly bad)

vena6080 08/23/2023 5:00 PM

i forgot to mention that the map ah to much different style

vena6080 08/23/2023 5:01 PM

we never get the collision again + is it speedbug ??

vena6080 08/23/2023 5:02 PM

if it's a speedbug you use it many time and i can say the same for other parts, we can see some part 3 or 4 times and most of the time for transition part

vena6080 08/23/2023 5:03 PM

a last example of messy part, to much entities

vena6080 08/23/2023 5:04 PM

be careful about cheat, skip a shield, skip a deep with sg bug, skip part with rocket or skip parts in many ways

vena6080 08/24/2023 10:07 AM

$decline