Is this your first map? I like it, definitely moderate though. Gonna do a proper test later.

yes it is my first map 😛

moderate 100%

-You should give hookthrough some transparency to tell it apart from hookables more easily. -Deep-freeze should have some transparency as well, layers like freeze, tele, deep, undeep etc. should always have some transparency. -There aren't shields on Tele-To 2, so you can just fall into tele and keep laser (other tee doesn't need to catch you). -You can remove the Tune layer and put your tune commands in Server Settings instead. -Make Tele-From 5 simply take you back up, many moderate players can't do a part like this in under a minute so it's just an unfair death for them.

Is this intentional? It looks odd (white part behind my tee and black in front)

Diagonal doors aren't needed and just look weird

Tele design in on the wrong layer here

There's no freeze gametile in speeders

This part is pretty difficult and faily, here's some tips how to improve it

This looks better (add an identical freeze layer for just the corners)

Add all decorative layers (moon, stars, trees etc.) to Detail

which commands do i need to make it happen?

change

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if you use tunes that affect the whole map it's better to do it like this instead of placing tune zone over the whole map

Many people complained about the speed tune being annoying and most parts work just fine without it, so it's just about adjusting a few parts and the map will be more enjoyable to play

we did the map with normal speed, only the noob filter (right side) and laser stuff will need some work

Also the big laser part

its doable but it needs some work ye

• the end gores

delete tp to kill tiles and add tp to start of the gores

But honestly it will be much more fun for moderate players without the tune

i agree

well i will remove the speed tiles

Yes but that makes a few parts difficult, you will need to make those work well again

Well i changed the map a little. -Removed Speed Tune -Changed some parts ( a little bit easier) -Changed the last part, no more countdown to death -Finish is now behind Tee -Filter was changed

missing corners

markings rotated the other way

nicer way to map freeze on hookthrough

I would add 1 more hookthrough to prevent a dumb fail

this is still annoying with weak hook, leave just one block please

should be hookable to make this part a bit easier

(near tele-to 4)

(near tele-to 8)

1 door is enough

I would connect unfreeze, moderate players might have trouble with this part

having to get laser again every time you fail the next part is annoying/difficult for noobies

I think that's all for now, nice map

dont a lot of moderate maps have parts similar to the second last one you posted

It's a pretty basic move, but what's wrong with that?

i dont think moderate players would have any problems doing that

lower moderate players might, and it can easily be fixed with a checkpoint

ok then

It doesn't really take away from the map's difficulty, you just don't have to get laser every time you fall

Changed the map a little: -Freeze on Hookthrough looks a bit better -Added Unfreeze like on the Screenshoot -Added Hookthrough on some Parts -You keep your laser, if you should fall in tele. -Removed one switch door

Im a bit confused about the tele to 4 and 8 part. i changed tele to 4 some blocks above but let tele to 8 like it is, because u can start with the part faster if u fail ( i can change that if it is not good).

-Some bug fixes -Corner fixes -Added hookable on some parts

I meant graphic bugs on decorations, mentioned tele 4 and 8 so you can find it on the map easier. Teleports 1 block above the ground is standard.

can u show me a example? how it should look like?

-Design fixes

I don't like it this map

feels like just boring lasers

• it's unbalanced

i dont like it aswell but its not bad for his first map

Too much laser focus otherwise great parts

And as others mentioned its rather 4* moderate

It's just a simple, pretty well mapped ddrace map. Nothing to complain about.

the time door parts are kinda pointless too

if at all, you need time to figure out what the point of it is, not for doing the part

you don't need time to figure anything out

You see a switch and a door, what could that possibly mean?!

agree with jao

I don't see the door from where the switch is

then I see the door and think "wtf is this, why was there a switch"

or if I missed something

I agree with Ravie, seems like a good map to me

Doble unfreeze tile. Game + Front

As for me, this map have imbalanced difficulty. Some parts are too easy and some of them are too hard compared to each other

$decline

Seriously? Why? It's a good map, at least come up with some excuse

I did? there have been no mapper responses so I assume there is no interest in this anymore

Since when does no mapper activity for a couple of days mean decline? There are year old maps in testing

The map is imballanced and quality of parts is pretty low, so I think its fairly declained. Need rework

he is free to post updates

and the year old maps are waiting for us not the mappers 😅

The last time somebody posted any issues was earlier today

besides it's summer, people are busy

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