#Light_Line
"Light Line" by kur35k [Novice]
DDNet 08/30/2024 12:39 PM
@filipka.

this is your map's testing channel! Post map updates here and remember to follow our mapper rules: https://ddnet.org/rules

DDNet 08/30/2024 12:39 PM

Map :lady_beetle: :

filipka. 08/30/2024 1:08 PM

i removed all blue teleport (number 5) and put them instead red checkpoint teleports

xewoiy 08/30/2024 1:43 PM
xewoiy 08/30/2024 1:49 PM

wat

xewoiy 08/30/2024 1:59 PM

short, oldschool, unbalanced, 50% of map is solo

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:02 PM

and missing corners

mirfay123 08/30/2024 2:02 PM

$decline

DDNet 08/30/2024 2:02 PM

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mirfay123 08/30/2024 2:02 PM

Ez

balami. 08/30/2024 2:04 PM

try to explain the issues more detailed, i dont think that this message is helpful from the perspective of a new mapper

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:05 PM

uh

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:06 PM

skip

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:06 PM

bored (repeats)

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:07 PM

skip

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:07 PM

skip

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:07 PM

bored (repeats)

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:10 PM

skips

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:12 PM

much solo

red = solo green = with tees

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:14 PM

repeats

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:15 PM

and all parts with tees is bored i think (and oldschool)

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:15 PM

just "main" for all oldschool maps parts

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:17 PM

repeats (and black is too slow, maybe stoppers or just cut it)

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:21 PM

add more creativity in parts, maybe steal some from new maps :)) (joke)

xewoiy 08/30/2024 2:23 PM

||do it discreetly

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vena6080 08/30/2024 2:48 PM

cheat everywhere on the map, for basic parts/not interesting parts + half of the map is solo

vena6080 08/30/2024 2:48 PM

check others map rls on ddnet

DDNet 08/30/2024 2:48 PM
@filipka.

Your map submission has been declined.

vena6080 08/30/2024 2:48 PM
vena6080 08/30/2024 2:49 PM

rectangle is solo parts and arrow = some cheats

vena6080 08/30/2024 2:49 PM
vena6080 08/30/2024 2:51 PM

red rectangle a random tele that teleport you in a troll room + unmarked in design, 1 more cheat and too much solo overall + basic parts

filipka. 08/30/2024 3:20 PM

all blue tele is secrets, its not cheats, like on linear

filipka. 08/30/2024 3:23 PM

they have design here

filipka. 08/30/2024 3:35 PM

can you give me little more time for fix this map?

balami. 08/30/2024 3:37 PM

you can take your time, if the channel disappeared, you can reupload your map in

#📬submit-maps

i would recommend to play the game more before you continue with mapping. i think you need more inspiration and more game knowledge to make your map good.

filipka. 08/30/2024 3:45 PM

maybe i make it better today or tomorrow

filipka. 08/30/2024 3:47 PM

please don't delete this channel, i need all advices in channel

balami. 08/30/2024 3:52 PM

dont worry there is an archive

balami. 08/30/2024 3:52 PM
gazebr 08/30/2024 4:53 PM

I doubt that a day or 2 will be enough to fix this map What others pointed is like 70% of the map, so imo it would be easier to start with a new one and take inspiration from recently released maps

gazebr 08/30/2024 4:54 PM

If you rework 10 parts in one day they are just gonna be plain and untested again

xewoiy 08/30/2024 5:13 PM

Yeah, I think it's better to start from scratch, taking into account all the mistakes

filipka. 08/30/2024 6:33 PM

ok, i think start from scratch, only background will remain

balami. 08/30/2024 7:22 PM

tbh you have to fix your background. remove the image you use and replace it with a quad, you can color quads by right click on the corners (this fix will reduce the map size)

filipka. 08/30/2024 7:37 PM

what do you mean, i need remove stars and moon?

balami. 08/30/2024 7:38 PM

remove this

balami. 08/30/2024 7:39 PM

also delete all the blue things

filipka. 08/30/2024 8:00 PM

like this?

balami. 08/30/2024 8:01 PM

i think you did it in the right way, if you want to recreate your old background, you also have to change the top right corner

filipka. 08/30/2024 8:05 PM

i think it looks better