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DDNet 11/29/2020 10:54 PM
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DDNet 11/29/2020 10:54 PM
Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:19 AM

This map I think isn't quite good enough to release but it was a good attempt. I will decline this map but I want to give you a few examples of the issues i have with the map:

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:24 AM

Skipping the first part with weapons seems to be better than doing the first part given how awkward it is. Red box: Its annoying to start the map to be instantly dropped in freeze. You also have shields there that can be avoided. More annoying than fun imo. Green box: Awkward starting part, isn't good for team 0 runs as there will be blocking. Light Blue Box: Rather faily drop for a novice map, you should place more unfreeze so you aren't in freeze on corners.

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:24 AM

Rocket fly might be a bit too much for novice players even though its short.

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:27 AM

This part is possible with 2 tees but I don't think that novice players will do it correctly, given that it seems to either require both tees getting grenade or back tracking. The solo unsaveable freeze section is too faily for novice, the top hammer hit section is also too faily imo.

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:28 AM

Rather awkward part at the one block gap, maybe place a block to line up against to jump up. Although I think removing the messy tiles there would be best.

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:29 AM

A bit faily for novice

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:29 AM

Not enough space between teleports for novice imo

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:30 AM

Was this supposed to be a grenade shot part? The top edge is failable which isn't that good for novice, maybe remove freeze on corner

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:31 AM

shotgun solo is more moderate difficulty and rather awkward to do.

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:31 AM

jetpack is cheatable here

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:34 AM

Who should get shotgun in this next section? Why doesn't the player who has shotgun just go to the top? I also don't understand why shotgun is needed? I found the easiest way to do the part was without it

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:35 AM

A bit too dull imo, with the length its also a bit too faily. Add platforms for players to land on and save each other.

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:37 AM

Here you have hidden a way to get all weapons before starting the map, I don't think that's ok for non entities players. Its ok to hide secrets but I don't think you should hide shortcuts like this.

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:39 AM

I encourage you to keep trying though, your second map will be an improvement I'm sure 🙂

Soapy Sandwich 11/30/2020 7:39 AM

$decline

Gug 11/30/2020 12:27 PM

only one needs a rocket, they both go up and the rocket guy goes back

Gug 11/30/2020 12:27 PM
Gug 11/30/2020 12:28 PM
Gug 11/30/2020 12:28 PM

need shotgun to get speed

Gug 11/30/2020 12:29 PM

but whatever now its declined anyways

Gug 11/30/2020 1:37 PM

and shields at the start are supposed to be avoidable

triki 11/30/2020 2:30 PM

if i look this

triki 11/30/2020 2:31 PM

and this

triki 11/30/2020 2:32 PM

huge difference in map structure

triki 11/30/2020 2:37 PM

First screen it llook like big boy in small room. Very little empty space, small aisles, tight, narrow. On second sreen all look good. no need more space and it is ok. keep it.