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do i see that right that the map is thirty fucking megabytes

I do not know why she weighs so much.

I fixed all the bugs, should I re-issue my card?

send it here

Oh, I seem to have forgotten to do the finishing

delete all the images that are blue

ok

but why?

blue means theyre unused

it takes up space in the map file

Is 30mb a new record?

I do not know why she weighs so much. 🐗 🐗 🐗

THIRTY MEGABYTES!!!

😭

I deleted all the blue images :3

send the updated map here

I'm sorry for all the inconvenience, this is my first time building a map (

okay

Hooray, it only weighs 3 megabytes

Some kind of teleportation again

But I have everything.

timecps

not start finish

Oh, well, I'll add it now.

3MBs is still a lot

for what upper one is made?

you can skip it without any troubles

it's decline anyway, maybe good as first map

Why do I not see this map in

?

I deleted the message, I thought it was necessary, I'm sorry.

pointless part again

laser? for what? not needed in next parts also

this hookthrough. for what?

unsolo to go in solo again? for what?

Hey, thanks for your submission. Unfortunately the map is not up to todays standards. ^^'

Some more specific things to point out:

1. Your parts are pretty repetitive, consisting of consecutive corner hooks and multiple times a one tile freeze tunnel at the end.
2. Two different designs for tele and three different ones for freeze. You should stick to one for each to make the gameplay less confusing.
3. Only using a weapon for one part is bad practice.
4. The gameplay is unnecessarily tight and not fun.
5. Good idea for a part but it's not well made and too tight again.
6. Three times basically the same part in one screenshot..
7. Could easily replace the special tiles with normal blocks (wouldn't make the part much better though).
8. Can skip the drag.
9. These parts are very repetitive and hence boring.
10. Too faily for novice.

11. A bit too hard for novice, don't you think?
12. That tele is pretty useless.
13. Why use a door? And that type of part again..
14. Inconvenient placement of the unsolo.
15. What is a team 0 part doing in here?
16. You don't need either weapon to complete the following parts.
17. Too many switches and you can't tell which one belongs to which door in design.

In general you use too many special tiles (doors, speedups, stoppers) and often don't leave enough space for players to maneuver. I recommend to look at more recently released maps to get a feeling of what we are looking for and then try again. Good luck! :)

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Thank you so much for your reply, I am ashamed that my map is so terrible, I will take my mistakes into account in the future. Goodbye

Don't be ashamed. Most first maps look similar. Yours is using tele correctly and it's finishable which is not the case for every map. :D

11. Your map does not contain quads, every art piece, e.g. the kobra, mapname, author name, are loaded in as a tilelayer.

Does map need to contain a quads?

no, but this is simply editor abuse, I call the editor police /s

Hbt on arctic festival or smh like that the mappers was write in entitie layer as time cp

u mean corneums signature xd

theres no rule against using tiles or rotations for decoration

idt this matters

some people use jungle midground as quad, some people as tiles, theres not 1 correct way

for me it just looks very suspicous, like if the mapper didn't understand quads. doing it this way is also unpractical, since you can't move your mapper name or the kobra precisely around

I could also argue, that it impacts performance, but this might be mostly miniscule here