#Odyssey
"Odyssey" by Gug [Novice]
DDNet 11/12/2021 10:25 PM
@Gug

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DDNet 11/12/2021 10:25 PM
cheeser0613 11/13/2021 4:07 AM

i think it will be better if tele is nearby the entrance

cheeser0613 11/13/2021 4:18 AM

unfreeze plz

cheeser0613 11/13/2021 4:19 AM
cheeser0613 11/13/2021 4:25 AM
cheeser0613 11/13/2021 4:26 AM

hammer run btw

cheeser0613 11/13/2021 4:29 AM

missing freeze

NoyrEx 11/13/2021 7:59 AM

better move this imo

NoyrEx 11/13/2021 8:00 AM

same

NoyrEx 11/13/2021 8:00 AM

why unfreeze tiles here?

Gug 11/13/2021 11:21 AM

if to tiles where there someone might teleport in front of someone who is playing the part and block him

Gug 11/13/2021 11:22 AM

if someone falls down there on accident so they can go in tele to go back to the part

Gug 11/13/2021 11:25 AM
Gug 11/13/2021 11:48 AM
Gug 11/13/2021 11:49 AM

idk how you make the recording so u dont have to download it

cheeser0613 11/13/2021 11:50 AM

i know how to pass, what i want to say is if the novice player really dont know how to pass this they will fail and cant save, but you fixed now so its ok

Gug 11/16/2021 10:39 PM
Gug 11/16/2021 10:40 PM

added unfreeze tiles on a platform at jetpack part

FeaRZ 11/20/2021 9:35 PM

Haha

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:18 AM

1.- down that like 3 tiles 2.- this goes for every totele/ctotele u just need to put unfreeze on them, there is no need to do it like that

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:20 AM

the map is way to big, i think u took seriously when someone told u that the map should be spacious

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:20 AM

1.- close that to force to do the part as it should be

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:23 AM

1.- that place to hook its just confusing 2.- almost every totele/ctotele is bad placed and to do it correctly u should remade how the parts are done

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:25 AM

orange: down that like 1 tile to not force the hammer bcs its hard for novices yellow: make that whole section ht, how it is now its bad

cheeser0613 11/27/2021 8:26 AM

can i complain about the background color hurt my eyes so much when i try to play the map?

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:28 AM

mmmm this part, here is an example of what you could do to improve it, the whole map its like bad mapped

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:30 AM

dont get me wrong by saying that the map is that bad, it actually have some nice parts, but the amount of weird/bad mapped things exceed the good things, some parts is just walk

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:31 AM

this for example

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:32 AM

imo this types of parts aren't good

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:36 AM

A: maybe here it would be better put a stopper and instead of grab and hammer the player do something like hammer him twice while he holds a+ jump, idk if this got well explained B: down that like 2 or 3 tiles

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:37 AM

i mean similar to this

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:38 AM

but easier...

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:40 AM

better if u do that ht and make the floor a lil bit longer, or just pull im from up

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:41 AM

also this part feels like meh

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:42 AM

besides that should be done in a different way and do it as a solo part due the blocking

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:42 AM

move the teles to there

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:44 AM

this part could be improve by doing this: 1.- moving the ht to there to hold him there 2.- deleting that hook 3.- and put freeze there

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:46 AM

1.- you could do something else there instead of just fall 2.- hard to hook there and very uncomfortable

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:48 AM

as i said you have nice parts but some others are trash so this could take u a lot of time fixing it, therefore try to improve it as good as u can

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:49 AM

cut the half of the whole map size, just make it big enough not extremely big as it is rn

Arrow 11/27/2021 8:50 AM

also try to improve the design, its quite ugly

Gug 11/27/2021 4:54 PM

i didnt do everything you said

Gug 11/27/2021 4:55 PM

only background ?

Gug 11/27/2021 4:56 PM

extra space never hurt anyone

Gug 11/27/2021 4:56 PM

the bigger the better

Arrow 11/27/2021 4:56 PM

Everythiing

Arrow 11/27/2021 4:56 PM

No

Arrow 11/27/2021 4:56 PM

U wrong

Gug 11/27/2021 4:57 PM

so you want me to change the background and the blocks ?

Arrow 11/27/2021 4:59 PM

Yes….

Gug 11/27/2021 5:09 PM

im not doing all that

Gug 11/27/2021 5:09 PM

background is now dark green and empty

Arrow 11/27/2021 5:12 PM

?

Arrow 11/27/2021 5:13 PM

Sad that u dont want to improve your map

Gug 11/27/2021 5:16 PM

i dont want to change the way it looks not the gameplay

cheeser0613 11/27/2021 5:16 PM

i think he just need some example on what to improve, when im new to mapping im also dont think i need to change because dont know what to change

Gug 11/27/2021 5:18 PM

ur saying to improve the looks not the gameplay

Gug 11/27/2021 5:18 PM

im not gonna remake the entire map with different looks

Arrow 11/27/2021 5:28 PM

Focus on gameplay i gave u a long list of what u should do

Arrow 11/27/2021 5:29 PM

The design do it later

Gug 11/27/2021 5:31 PM

down what 2 or 3 tiles ? u marked the entire thing

Gug 11/27/2021 5:32 PM

what do you mean by "bad placed" ?

Gug 11/27/2021 5:32 PM

how do i good place it ?

Gug 11/27/2021 5:33 PM

why

cheeser0613 11/27/2021 5:35 PM

more fast to resetup everything if fail

cheeser0613 11/27/2021 5:35 PM

and consider use cp tele otherwise other will just jump down to skip

Gug 11/27/2021 5:39 PM

if someone wants to speedrun this map tee number 1 can hammer tee number 2 up there to be faster

Gug 11/27/2021 5:39 PM

i dont know why you want me to shrink my map so much

cheeser0613 11/27/2021 5:45 PM

big map is ok but overbig is just let most of the playing experience become walking simulator (assuming they know what to do )

Gug 11/27/2021 5:49 PM
Gug 11/27/2021 6:09 PM
Gug 11/27/2021 6:20 PM
Gug 11/27/2021 6:21 PM

theres some walking but i dont think its that big

Gug 11/27/2021 7:22 PM

tommorow i send new version

Cøke 11/27/2021 8:43 PM
Gug 11/28/2021 3:18 PM
Gug 11/28/2021 3:18 PM
Arrow 12/19/2021 3:38 AM

426,82 kb just for the bg xd

Arrow 12/19/2021 3:39 AM

i didnt saw any improvements gameplay wise

Gug 12/19/2021 11:33 AM

see*

Gug 12/20/2021 10:11 AM

this map isnt good enough

Gug 12/20/2021 10:11 AM

i think you should decline it

TuhatKauno 12/20/2021 1:37 PM

isn't*

Souly 12/20/2021 1:51 PM

is not*

DarkOort 12/20/2021 1:51 PM

I decline this map because it's not releasable. There are big problems of design, parts and map's structure It's better to start a new one

DarkOort 12/20/2021 1:51 PM

$decline

justFlippo 12/20/2021 3:31 PM
Gug 12/20/2021 6:35 PM
Boti. 12/20/2021 8:12 PM

Same