#Notebook
"Notebook" by Alive_Mous5 [Novice]
DDNet 12/17/2020 12:16 PM
@Mоùs5

this is your map's testing channel! Post map updates here and remember to follow our mapper rules: https://ddnet.tw/rules

DDNet 12/17/2020 12:16 PM
Mоùs5 12/17/2020 12:51 PM

some litle decor changes

Mоùs5 12/18/2020 6:40 AM

Made nicer background Instead of a killing eye

texnonik 12/18/2020 10:05 AM

First two parts repetetive

texnonik 12/18/2020 10:05 AM
Mоùs5 12/18/2020 10:24 AM

what?

Mоùs5 12/18/2020 10:30 AM

ah yes

allocaツ 12/18/2020 10:54 AM

1) the map is way too tight 2) the parts have unbalanced difficulty. some parts are moderate (drag part) 3) there is a lot of repetitiveness going on. you have a good idea, but copy it multiple times 4) there is a lot of unfreeze missing

overall you have some good ideas combining different elements (no jump + jetpack, telehook, infinite jump etc). but that is not enough to make a releasable map, the map should have a overall quality. the design is clean, but maybe too basic. look at recent novice map releases, especially lavender forest, to see how bigger space can improve a map drastically. you could make a big map and place your ideas there in little parts, that would be a modern novice attempt.

try to play more maps to gain overall experience. that's important so you understand how to balance parts according to a set difficulty (novice x stars)

I hope you can take your ideas and my advice here to improve on your next maps

allocaツ 12/18/2020 10:54 AM

$decline

Mоùs5 12/18/2020 10:55 AM

Thanks for advice

allocaツ 12/18/2020 11:06 AM

🙂 ✌️