Mentions:

fix skip and i forgot 1 tile freeze

looks very pretty

1. The start bothers me, I don't know, the movement for the aled (or hammer wall) is really bad xd
2. Having to grab the tee to activate the switch and then go back to pass the part feels really bad to me because it breaks the flow of the part
3. I found this hammer really bad, but that’s just my personal opinion 4.This speedup is really bad, because when you try to move the tee to the left side, the speedup just pushes it

2. i deleted switch 3. hammer now better 4. add more space

forgot to fix some mistakes in design

The map has severe structural problems; besides constantly bumping into blocks, there are parts like this one that wouldn't need the speedup, but only exist because you left the map with too little space

Mention:

The map isn't bad, but the real problem is the space. Try to make the sections with multiple movements last longer, and leave more space between them so you don't have to use speed up or anything like that.

i dunno telling new mappers a reason then declining with one example is bad try to show them exactly whats wrong and maybe how they couldve done it better