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structure and space is fine, gameplay is basic but work well and i think it's good to have some easy basic dummy

i do easy dummy map, if some parts unbalanced i fix this parts

going back here is not smooth and the speeder is not a great utilization

it's balance i think

and even if it's slower, you can go with your dummy on the right pass

for this short map i think slow parts is good, if i wrong i fix it

i don't think cp are rly necessary here, it's more messy

i mean it doesn't give a good flow, part can be slow with flow, or slow because it's more a puzzle like or other reason, but here it feel weird

better connect all the parts, tp for a little distance is useless and the way to fix the skip with switch is not good (in many parts) better find a way to use the dummy or else so you can't go both up

These checkpoints are so that you don't have to go back when you fall.

a bit tight and the switch problems

what are the problems with switching here?

i test this map all good work

switch are not needed, map can be more clean, (but yes it works)

1 spawn only, because it's 1 tee, and you don't need a 4 and a 5 for the same spawn

same here for the switch it's useless

and again,

• the speeder is not great, you can put tele on the border

cheatable

ok, I can remove tp 5 and put tp 4 instead of tp 5.

the speeder and switch is again the same problem and the antihook is not well used, and still can be cheated (taking grenade)

even if it's made to be easy and basic, it can be a bit more developed on some parts

hard to see the diff between HT and unhook

i think i'll decline for now but map can be work and repost, maybe just reset if it's done well before the channel will be archived

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Imo map is tooo basic, doesnt have any special or cool creative parts. Still was fun to play. Design is also okay. Its not a bad map but its not offering enough for a release rn.

also miss some command in server setting, you need to force 2p and restrict the deepfly

idk how fix it

i fix misstakes

thanks

typed commands

made the part more universal

deleted door

need more universal part or more hard?

remove

He put up shields so that he couldn't be outsmarted

i didnt say anything if u said thats on me btw^ i didnt even say post the map anyway

going right is slower so its not rlly a skip

i got stuck last time and to top things off i finished with 15mins cuz no cps

harder than intended

from far ig

i agree with other opinions elsewise.

from dms tho; said upload the map to me, not here :/ but i kinda have a feeling this can make through

VéNa alsoo if i have enh time imma make an obstacle course whete u drag

keep in mind that i dont rlly spend alot on this map so 87% not making onr

i already typed commands in the secret unknown first ver, but maybe he just made a new map and forgot

Do I need to make it bigger?

Iam not a tester, but i really like short maps. But than every part needs to be creative and something more special imo. You have like a few straight gores parts and some basic drags seen a hundred times. Make it a bit more unique. In germany we say: Das Salz in der Suppe fehlt.

ok thanks

no

just fix all of the above

Fun short map but unbalanced. Some parts are novice (and a little bit boring) and some are main/brutal

we don't have main here 🤓

yeah we have stars in dummy

Please show me which parts are not balanced, I will balance them.

This part is too easy i think

This part is too easy too

This part you can go down innstead of doing the upper part

Short and Simple Map This map would be really good if it had been released before Dummy Chamber or Caventure

I found this a bit uncomfortable, when picking up the dummy I hit the wall and the dummy falls

There is no unfreeze in some parts where it should be (for me at least)

Isn't it easier just to use the tele 5 instead of the tele 4?

I can't believe this is done by 2 people generally maps with just 1 mappers are already big, if they are not big they are cool this one is a simple map with nothing new maybe one made the map and the other made the design

harder than intended

we just split work but now im working on desing and quads more often

send map

made some qol and buffed a part

?

approve

checkmark

1 sec

idk

the new ver doesnt upload

made that part less harder

is the tileset a public tileset? looks very much like planet9

idk ask that guy

you should probably have talked with your co-mapper

why

added a ht to that part seemed hard af

Planet 9 has uneven blocks, but these blocks are also smooth.

the design on the tiles are exactly like those on planet 9

1 sec

by bit

it does say it is from bit, yet i dont think they are

so maybe it is from planet9, but who cares anyway

the type of tester to riot because of stolen design

no u

most things are released CC-BY, e.g you're free to use them but give the creators proper credits and/or ask them beforehand.

tho in general i wouldnt recommend taking the design of others, otherwise maps would just look like mere copys

also added his logo, so yall dont get mad (smwhere on the start)

this map has other color, it aint brutal, and it is kinda easy

i didnt take the desing, _kkrs did

also you have any idea why checking that message doesnt do anything

reset the map like 3 times idk

this

did kkrs approve it? - only channel owner and testers can approve it iirc

yeah he did

on all of the vers above

maybe the bot has a hiccup idunno

yup worked when i did it

y'all such beta testers its crazy

it doesnt upload on the server btw

alr gtg

it does - it just takes a while.

it didnt with his version

you.. changed the name.. of the map file...

reuploading this version with the proper name

jumping here will freeze you - annoying because you usually jump out of habit

this could be solved much cleaner with regular TP instead of walls of CP

maybe this could be solved a little cleaner aswell, i pulled him right out of habit, dragged him the entire way and while that isnt dead (because you basically skip the other part because of it) - it's just meh.

this still spreads across the entire map :/

the idea is good, we need dummy maps accessible for newer players

and ofc - obvious skips

I can add a button that opens the door when pressed.

sounds like a lazy fix

^

think of a different way to structure a part instead of fixing it with special tiles.

for every unneccessary tile - a twinbop dies.

I did it on purpose so that in the next part he would activate the door in the desk by pressing the button, but I was told to remove it

here

need to tell vena why you chose to do that instead of just removing it - maybe vena just didnt think theres a reason because he missed that you could skip it alltogether

do door for no skip part

I couldn't think of anything better than adding a door in 5 seconds.

do only 1 tele for 1 part

do part more universal

there need to deactivate the door and return Dummy through the same part.

too do part more universal

I think I've fixed all the errors that caused the map to be rejected.

u can skip both platform here btw

hope its just because of screenshot that makes the design looks fucked up?

i know the reason, i always checked the reason, but he put 2 anti cheat with swtich (1 would be enough) and we prefere clean mapping, the same can be done without switch

who cares, its even easier with platforms

fixed some stuff, also i added some stoppers to the part in reply since i got confused once and didnt even notice that u have to hook dummy up.

2

because its a skip, makes the part faster

no it doesnt

need some1 to test

...

uuh

for some reason last door is not enabled so its possible to team finish

this is not fixed

this is not fixed and i want to agree that the hookblocker tile shouldnt be used for such case, you should think how to fix things with basic tiles first instead of placing hookblocker or other special tiles

i kinda agree with previous commentators here. map is VERY short and the parts here are the most basic ones. if you want it to be released you need to make map at least 2-3 times bigger and add some refreshing parts between simple parts

As VeNa mentioned the structure and spacing here is really good, design is cute too

you can take a look at the "Bomb Raid" maps, these maps are simple but offers something refreshing between simple drags and the length is not that short

Bomb Raids=Best maps!!

^ the bot always answering this when i use any slash command. the command is still working tho, just fyi

-# DDNet is thinking...

i found a conclusion how to fix the skip

will also fix

i litellary asked in

if such a map is long enough

and beilive it or not, even sum testers said ye

ill fix later

map is not releasable if u are not gonna make it at least 2-3 times bigger. there currently almost no content to play

ok then ima quit mapping for sum time, maybe i come back

can you focus on the map? ima be off for a looong time.

when you are done dm me and ill maybe check the fixes

ok