Mentions:

hi

kinda annoying to play since you have to rls early for unfreeze

not good to have faily parts in solo like this

especially since it might be easy to accidentally fall in there after holding A

you have to be careful of fails like this and prevent them

annoying tele placement since sometimes you go too far into the < tele

teles should usually teleport nearby, this is a little bit of a reach (tele 4 goes to the "previous" part >)

novice players cant do this

ending is definitely a bit too faily / difficult

the map could use some balancing changes, it has some much harder parts near the end (including the final part)

putting switches where people can't see what it does is a little misleading and confusing for a lot of players

u mean whole this area?

ye, that whole area is a bit harder than the rest

map structure is cool and refreshing, it's nice to see a map that doesn't just go left to right, but u really need to work on the structure and coherence of the parts

idk what can i do for this part

u should plan more about the spacing around your parts

for example if a guy jumps up to that point, both hooks to get him out are really awkward

even though jumping to that point might make the most sense, the player is punished as now the top guy has to do an awkward hook

stuff like this is easily cheatable even with the stopper

speedup?

you should force parts like this in other ways rather than the classic "1 > < 2" way

ye speedup*

no reason to give grenade for this part since you don't even need grenade to finish it

ah

its just one part

it doesnt count, right

ye, i mean it's kinda lame to just give grenade for one forced part wherre u just nade them

i would just not give grenade at all, seems kinda useless here

i dont understand the tele4 thing

its just better to put totele closer to from-tele

see, i'm on default zoom (Which a lot of novices will be on), if I fail and drop the dummy in the tele here they spawn offscreen

the map needs a lot of rework for each individual parts, try to focus on balancing and more 'intuitive' gameplay, but i like the general structure and pathing of it

i'm gonna decline cause it needs big reworks, feel free to resubmit when you think you've fixed it all

Mention:

yh

thanks for testing

have a good night

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bro

hi Vro

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