#towerhell
"Towerhell" by Anatomy [Solo]
DDNet 09/20/2020 1:11 PM
@Anatomy

this is your map's testing channel! Post map updates here and remember to follow our mapper rules: https://ddnet.tw/rules

Anatomy 09/20/2020 1:22 PM
allocaツ 09/20/2020 1:53 PM

you can skip the whole map by timing your dj while swinging and landing on the edge there.

allocaツ 09/20/2020 1:53 PM

00:07 sec finish time

Pepe 09/20/2020 1:59 PM

Map looks like it was taken out from Kobra maps

Anatomy 09/20/2020 1:59 PM
@allocaツ

wait i test xD

Anatomy 09/20/2020 2:00 PM

How?

allocaツ 09/20/2020 2:00 PM

you can also make a grenade here to directly go to finish and skip last parts

allocaツ 09/20/2020 2:04 PM
@Anatomy
Anatomy 09/20/2020 2:05 PM

Off,okay i fix it xD

Anatomy 09/20/2020 2:05 PM

Idk how i cant jump at edge

Anatomy 09/20/2020 2:06 PM
allocaツ 09/20/2020 2:25 PM

lots of design edges missig in your map

allocaツ 09/20/2020 2:25 PM

but besides the design, the map needs a lot of fixing for gameplay. the parts are all very tight, like the grenade speed parts are both weird. the first one makes you hit the ceiling and miss the unfreeze, the second one suggest to make a double at start but ceiling too low - two normal grenades there are tight.. the speedups are weird, they sometimes catapult you into the freeze and you have to wait to fall into ufnreeze or teleport. the freeze jump after switch two is so tight and faily, just boring. last part you get grenade and laser but don't even need them, maybe just laser.

just seems like a lot of unflowy untested parts, the map is short but still confusing with all these stoppers. and overall the parts are not really creative (except the part where you have to deactive switch 2 that was kind of clever).

in my opinion the map is not worth a release unless you rework the map. or you could better invest your time in starting a new map; there you can right away add more space

Anatomy 09/20/2020 2:32 PM

Kk

Anatomy 09/20/2020 3:19 PM
Anatomy 09/20/2020 3:19 PM
@allocaツ
allocaツ 09/20/2020 3:29 PM

you can miss laser here

allocaツ 09/20/2020 3:30 PM

armor not needed?

Anatomy 09/20/2020 3:31 PM

Need

Anatomy 09/20/2020 3:32 PM

How create? I want make if you press button,bullet start fly?xD

allocaツ 09/20/2020 3:32 PM

can you extend this a bit more to the right? because i still frequently hit the ceiling 1 - 2 blocks too earlier. you could also make the unfreeze vertical !

allocaツ 09/20/2020 3:33 PM

How create? I want make if you press button,bullet start fly?xD what do you mean? where?

Anatomy 09/20/2020 3:33 PM

I create new map,and idk how use button for bullet

allocaツ 09/20/2020 3:35 PM

a freeze bullet?

Anatomy 09/20/2020 3:35 PM

Ye

allocaツ 09/20/2020 3:44 PM

i don't think you can turn on a freeze bullet, they are always active.

Anatomy 09/20/2020 3:44 PM

If i add button he work,if dont he work xD

allocaツ 09/20/2020 3:46 PM

post a screenshot of entities in

#questions

and ask it there,

Anatomy 09/20/2020 3:47 PM

You know all tune comands?

allocaツ 09/20/2020 3:48 PM

yeah i can dm you a list

Anatomy 09/20/2020 3:48 PM

Plz give :D

allocaツ 09/20/2020 3:48 PM

but what about this map, will you work on this ?

Anatomy 09/20/2020 3:48 PM

NeoAdventure name

Anatomy 09/20/2020 4:00 PM

Superman*

Anatomy 09/20/2020 4:00 PM

XD

Anatomy 09/20/2020 4:16 PM

I finish my map(supermanadventure) in next day

Cøke 09/20/2020 8:19 PM
@Anatomy

u rework this map?

Anatomy 09/21/2020 5:46 AM

Ye

Anatomy 09/21/2020 5:47 AM
✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 7:50 PM

Давольно раздрожающий парт

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 7:54 PM
✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 7:54 PM
✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 7:54 PM

Снизь скорость трех стрелочек

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 7:54 PM

ибо когда возвращаешся с лазером когда в них падаешь раздражает

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 7:56 PM

А вот тут повысь

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 7:56 PM
✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 7:56 PM

Поскольку когда попадаешь на одну эту стрелку скорости не хватает и ты тупо фейлишь на эдже фризе

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 8:22 PM

Сделай тут лучше тп

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 8:22 PM
✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 8:22 PM

Ибо раздражает парт

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 8:28 PM

🇷🇺 Мой вердикт по скринам на русском 🇷🇺

🇺🇸 My verdict on screenshots in English 🇺🇸

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 8:28 PM
Kicker 09/22/2020 9:10 PM

astral/crying for testing lead

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 9:17 PM
@Kicker

no me suck

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/22/2020 9:17 PM
Anatomy 09/23/2020 4:30 AM
Anatomy 09/23/2020 12:51 PM
✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:12 PM
Anatomy 09/23/2020 1:14 PM
Anatomy 09/23/2020 1:15 PM

Намана?

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:16 PM

Щяс тестю

Anatomy 09/23/2020 1:17 PM

Кк

Anatomy 09/23/2020 1:17 PM
Welf 09/23/2020 1:20 PM
@✨Astral|Crying🌙

stop writing in russian

Welf 09/23/2020 1:20 PM

this is map testing and i want to understand, what's happening here

Welf 09/23/2020 1:20 PM

you can write with the mapper in dms

Anatomy 09/23/2020 1:20 PM
@Welf

Idk all english worlds

Anatomy 09/23/2020 1:20 PM
Welf 09/23/2020 1:21 PM
@✨Astral|Crying🌙

this is your last warning

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:24 PM
@Welf

u are racist?

Welf 09/23/2020 1:24 PM
@✨Astral|Crying🌙

no?

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:24 PM
✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:24 PM

but why u dont like russian languege

Welf 09/23/2020 1:25 PM

i don't understand it and it's spam for us

Welf 09/23/2020 1:25 PM

just use the dms

Anatomy 09/23/2020 1:25 PM
✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:25 PM

if u write on english im say to u anything?

Welf 09/23/2020 1:25 PM

i don't understand you

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:25 PM

if have problems just go translate

Welf 09/23/2020 1:25 PM

just use dms, sometimes the translation is bad

WSikeきりん 09/23/2020 1:25 PM

But if he does help great, and it's easier for him, and it leads on making map better, why?

Welf 09/23/2020 1:25 PM

and it takes alot of time to translate all the messages

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:25 PM

nope

Melio 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

then use dms

Welf 09/23/2020 1:26 PM
@WSikeきりん

even in that case astral can use dms

Melio 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

if u cant otherwise

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

but if im want too know

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

what are fixing

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

what me do

Melio 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

this whole discord is englisch only, except off-topic

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

to who go dms

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

im dont understand english

Welf 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

dms with the mapper

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

what me do

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

translate bad

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

mapper english

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

what me do

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:26 PM

say

WSikeきりん 09/23/2020 1:27 PM

But now mapper russian

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:27 PM

its just for example

Welf 09/23/2020 1:28 PM

i am so confused, wtf do you even want? if the mapper is english and you only speak russian, you can't test their map. stop offtopic, stop arguing here. if you have further questions, write them in dms, i will delete all offtopic now.

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:28 PM

oops wrong screen

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:29 PM
@Anatomy

Can u move here shields for 1 block right because its annoying when u get sg u just removed it on the moment

Anatomy 09/23/2020 1:29 PM

Ok

Anatomy 09/23/2020 1:30 PM

Have more moment where need fix?

✨Astral|Crying🌙 09/23/2020 1:31 PM

This block was a weird

Anatomy 09/23/2020 1:32 PM

Kk i fix it

Anatomy 09/23/2020 1:37 PM
allocaツ 09/24/2020 3:02 AM

Fixing little things won't make the map good enough for release. It's an average / bad map with generic parts and no outstanding qualities. You showed creativity especially in your other recent map uploads, so please don't feel demotivated when your attempts should become declined. Listen to the suggestions here and on the other channels of your reviewed maps.

My suggestions for you:

  • create difficulty not through tightness in parts / repetition
  • make your maps longer
  • keep the part structure linear and next to each other (don't connect parts with teleport - don't abuse too many stoppers to re-use part segments; it's confusing)
Welf 09/26/2020 11:59 AM

Some parts in this map are okay, but this is a weird combination. Some stuff is super easy and unfaily, some parts are faily, some parts are unfaily (in a short map). So this map is neither a "cool" short faily challenge nor a "cool" unfaily map with innovative gameplay. The parts in this map are not special and the gameplay is basic, too. I think you should play some solo more solo maps to get an idea about good gameplay. Solo maps can be very different, so it's hard to tell you what exactly you should do, besides stuff like "make your map unique and good in it's own way".

Welf 09/26/2020 11:59 AM

$decline

Anatomy 09/26/2020 12:23 PM

Kk