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Nice dummy map exspecially the design is very well done. Good flow I like it! Nothing else to be said

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Good dummy map but I think need to make this map a little longer.

:3

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suker

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Nice dummy 3* map

Ахах)

Дизайн фан и бонус до 3

dont forget

😃 you can skip one part with it

Fixed, but added to switch open and added to

, but maybe at not skipped now.

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Parts aren't that balanced since i find myself the main parts being easier than the faily drag you put in the middle of them. The design is pretty solid, not too dark and not too bright and all the colors combine with each other which makes an enjoyable map to play without entities.

Really, that's first posted and voted, should people easy parts at balanced parts, drag are not faily of parts that balanced. Nevertheless, I fixed parts.

what's the reaction for 🆙

uploaded

(means the map is on test servers)

https://i.imgur.com/50zjh78.png i would consider adding a cp there on this part, considering the global map's difficulty and the length of this part, it would make it overall more balanced and less rage on having to do the whole part again

other than that very nice map, the very last solo rocket part is probably too hard tho

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I know, added to cp than 2 parts, but thanks.

hold the 4 grenades

it's not hard ^^

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Drag parts are excruciatingly long, freeze parts are way too faily in relation to the rest of the map. Design looks good enough but you should remove all the unused doodads from the tilesets. There are no parts/ideas that I have not seen before in other maps, pretty much everything is copied from something else even down to design. Aside from the faily freeze parts the difficulty is 2 rather than 3. Logos are blurry but you probably don't care.

Sorry, but did drag is not long parts that added in CP, edited for new design for grass, also doesn't copies then down design and don't unused the tileset. Nevertheless, added a new logo for new design, but thanks for testing.

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Fixed the door switch for two cheats.

Fixed with filter and hooktrough marked.

needs entities off signs were crucial info is in the design

e.g. last part

thanks to testing but then tomorrow fix it.

imo the rough cp font doesn't fit to the rest

maybe make one in the style of the logo?

should be white? (other positive markings are white as well)

you need to put some design elements in HD

very similar parts, all at the end/start of parts is a bit meh

especially since the map is so short

to be fair, the down ones have a little twist so it's not that bad

the spawns shouldn't be so widely spread. it's annoying to get the dummy if you spawn near to the start and the dummy most right

Thanks to testing, but don't be short, It's a long that's parts and done. Also, added the moon.

You probably don't need this many bombs in this tileset, there is no way you used all of them. Of the 'bombs_deathtiles' tileset you only used 1 tile. I think you should remove unused tiles from the tilesets to save some file size.

This marking (top image) makes me think of super-jump rather than jump-refill, I advise you to change it to one like the bottom image, or something else if you don't think this looks good, as long as you make it clear.

Thanks, but this have tileset in forum and now looking.

https://forum.ddnet.tw/viewtopic.php?f=42&t=6563

Wouldn't those bombs be enough?

what

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/459260079254929409/464433301721972737/unknown.png Why so many?

I thinking 🤔

i have created this many bomb for after, I believe now tomorrow fixing soon or not.

needs entities off sign here

1 entities off sign at the finish part is sufficient btw 😄

I done and now release :D

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Great little map, just a shame that not much new is gebruht - Much is known, but I think cool that you have mapped many good ideas in a map with partial white good parts. PS: mB a bit short

hmm

but thanks

I think those signs are not needed, there is freeze so it's obvious you can fail

This part could be made a bit easier, but more interesting

Those arrows are not needed imo

other than that everything seems good

Ah, also here a ! would actually be useful

Also here

Thanks, because deleted this signs, filter parts and edited a door switch!

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Forgot, deleted at one signs and add corner.

I will new parts, but anyways fix them soon.

you should really take a course on english, it would help you a lot dude|

idk

Finally, I fixed the part and added some parts, but was should be long ;)

Forgot, I fixed unhookable and added tele cp

You should make the gores parts more interesting, and not as faily

ok thanks, I will tomorrow fixing

Today fixed, but I thinking this added tele of gores that not faily

you forgot again the upload that test servers

sorry (btw any mrs and tester can upload, not only me)

you didn't add enough CPs for the player. teles should port to a reasonable spot (red arrow), not far away from it (blue arrow)

this is just an example, there are more similar problems

move switches like this further up so the door opens instantly and doesn't interrupt flow (also just an example)

there is no need for the blue marked hook due to the red marked arrows

this doesn't work: the dummy gets stuck on the edge between stoppers and unhook

the blue-tele part shouldn't be one-try; no one will expect it

this construction is really overshooting what it does (getting the dummy down the tube)

why? opposes flow and is kinda unnecessary. just instantly port the dummy to TO-17

do all 4 nades even touch the ground at last part? looks like only 2 or 3 make it down

end of CP-5 part is too hard, drag parts with endless are too easy

don't put crucial layers in HD lol (hookable, etc)

entity bug

would be nice to have unfreeze after first freeze for QOL

causes chat-spam

Finally, I done, fixed with freeze and etc 😊

release or wait?

https://imgur.com/gallery/qyT7QRW

oops forgot one

these should be FROM-28

ah and in my first screen, don't make a CP that ports you behind the door xD

All done and release!

You didn't change the gores parts, only added teleport in the one where it's least needed

Done, but I don't have gores parts

seems like I wasn't clear enough: https://imgur.com/gallery/pLj2IOo

also revert the switch 13 change, it doesn't work anymore

Done, but I forgot added tele of marked and fixed.

this still causes chat spam because you have to go past the 2x one to get speed. you also forgot the jump marking on the 2x one

this bug is back

switch 13 rescue system still doesn't work, please do it how you did it originally

you could add time-CPs, the map is quite inviting to speedrun

Done

you can cheat 4 jumps now

red ones need to be timed-switches, green ones can be removed

Done and release!

but thanks

these switches are useless now

can also cheat 4 jumps like this

and last fixed

looks good from my side now, but we should at least wait for 2 more ratings or till it's scheduled (next week)

if you still want something changed, explain it to him :P

You don't need tele in solo-gores parts, those are easy enough. But dummy-drag gores are still faily imo, maybe remove freeze on the ceilings? Tele 27 takes dummy back to CP6. CP9 until CP13 are difficult compared to the rest of the map imo, however, the new parts are an improvement.

Done, but don't need this tele gores imo, what does should CP9 until CP13 is still easy, so I forgot added the CP8. I fixed the tele gores and filter

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Tele 4 part is just as faily as it was, but much harder. The other gores parts are not changed at all.

Not gores parts at all, it's added with tele, but fixed tele 4, so just easy

Use CP @tele 4 so if the dragger hits it he doesnt die

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cheat, both can go down

did u do it? looked too hard to me

yaap

gotta have to boat at the end though, its pretty dang hard

ah good to know

this transition seems pretty hard without dj

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Generic dummy map for me, nothing special i've seen pretty much all parts before so there wasn't any learning curve, but still kinda enjoyed playing it because flow was good. And I think this map will still be challenging for moderate player

huh yeah, fixed and added with switch and jumps, but thanks Lexin

I thought It was people is nice gameplay at all parts, also should people than parts are great, flow and design.

you can still do Lexin's cheat I think: open the door and go back

but in general I find the door as anti-cheat pretty lame

there is probably a better way to prevent it

the CP-4 fix is also weird: you don't have to hook the tee into the marked tele anymore

I find that the balance isn't that good

Like

the first part is novice or mod1

and at the end u've some faily drags

it's fine to have an easy part at the start of the map + the faily drags are short and easy

okok

Done

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Fyi

this isn't the normal way ? :o

what a skip

deleted skippable

this tele is really weird; it's not logical to be ported so far to the right when you have never been there before, you should rather remove freeze at the ceiling and leave it faily

seems like there is endless-off in both game and front layer

you should move the unhook wall to where the green marking is, remove the tele, and change the laser pull to a red one

you should remove this text as it's misleading; holding and shooting 3 grenades is not what you need to do

Thanks

, I fixed all

release?

Hey, I had fun playing this map 🙂

Also played it some time ago, glad to see it improved a lot design- and gameplay-wise. The alternation of unfailable drag parts and very punitive gores-like parts was a bit lame back then, good that you made the latter parts easier. The last gores-like part is still too faily compared to the other ones imo.

The design is ok, but too much information is displayed for my taste. Mainly:

• switch activator markings (natural for me that failing the part closes the door)
• CPs markings at the end of a checkpoint "area" (e.g. CP-9, CP-19)

See further comments here :

https://imgur.com/a/0gtJqmT

If the map is to be released, I would see it as a(n easy) Dummy 3*.

balance= 5 6 flow=8 creativity=4 playability=6 fun=4 design=2

~Pollex

Thanks

, but I fixed with switch and etc, I did you have tester, just should release them

because that not faily in last part in gores, I guess does easy gores, was people is not faily at gores

and delete with turn-off entities of last part

wow, so fast 😮 Maybe even a bit too fast actually ^^' (those were only suggestions i'm not a tester/MRS ^^)

There are a few misunderstings i think (sry if it was unclear) :

I did not say to remove door at CP5 and to write AREA on CPs xd also, you can't get dummy back next to CTO-16 now!

• be careful, there is a missing tile on some CPs

btw, 1 'Turn OFF entities' at the last part could have stayed maybe ? (to see the arrow)

and yea remember i'm not a tester and not in MRS 😁

Done

but I forgot, added with tele-cp

A few flaws remain : https://imgur.com/a/yJSSAev

good test

, thanks

Done

I fixed with tele, delete at switch marking and change with part at dummy

well, can your release?

Why did you remove the hookthrough? This hook is difficult now

hooking the tee out can be tricky/annoying

this part with tele is difficult

this drag is difficult (putting tele will not make it better) make it easier by making it wider, or removing freeze on the ceiling

Door #5 is not needed anymore, neither is CP 11

If you grab CP 13 without finishing the drag part you can't go back, so you're softlocked (dumb, I know, but should still be fixed)

Inconsistent CP markings

reuploaded new version, since i missclicked on an old version and it overwrote it

you could’ve just added a ☑ on his last one ^^

Missing freeze corner

automapper bug

A few flaws have been added :p https://imgur.com/a/I8vUOwn

Agree with Ravie's comments, except:

Maybe you do it the wrong way ? Look Rico's message, you only need to hook twice.

Also, I'm not sure that making the gores wider makes them easier since it increases the distance between the ceilling and the dummy (when on the floor), which you both have to hook. But removing some freeze on the ceiling does for sure.

I could fixing soon now, but thanks for few testing

I did Rico said skipped and should normal ways

because will doesn't hard map

Done and delete gores now, but I think bot is online

wouldn't say all changes are improvements

e.g. this looks really boring

here you now have a super long part with a hard end which is likely to fail (since it requires reading the info). it will be annoying to re-do the whole part before

switches should probably be moved above the tele, it's possible that they won't be triggered

these stoppers don't make the part easier, it's harder to anticipate when dummy will come down + the part doesn't need any balancing

you should make this hookable, otherwise you're dead if you panicked and lost dj

missing endless-off

you should stop making major changes to the map or at least think more about them; your last updates introduced a lot flaws

just fix the missing stuff and then leave it that way

btw : "Look Rico's message, you only need to hook twice." >it's an easy map, a lot hooks can be skipped if you are skilled enough - that doesn't mean you should remove those

keeping the easy way with an extra hook doesn't take away the possibility to do it the pro way

^yes sure, coz I saw it as a Dummy 3* but it's maybe a bit too much actually ^^

To clarify why i posted that skip. It was titled "Fyi (for your infromation/interest)" it just means that there is a skip. Its just to point it out. Its the mappers choice ifhe wants to change it. Not a necessary change.

I didn't that boring this parts, because should change the parts and his anyways deleted with hook through at first part, just easy way now

but I fixed all and we releasing now

I believe can be new map soon now!

I kept hitting this tele while trying to swing and getting teleported back to the start of the part (long way to walk)

I believe you should add speeders in all places like this, it's not always needed but in your map you often just barely get the dummy far enough which increases the chance to get edge

In this part after dummy gets teleported you get enough bounce to hit this freeze

thanks for

, so

I fixed with hook trough and added cp

release?

why do you keep making this hook harder? now it's for sure too hard

there is no cp here, but there shouldn't be anyways

just remove the block and the cp design

I'm not sure if this cp was there before, but there is no need for it either

you used this part element very often already, better think of something more different (btw that tele shouldn't put you to the cp 8 above)

have to agree that this is too faily and unpredictable for lower tier players

so please take care of what you change and that you do it properly

then we can release it

Thanks

, but this don't need delete this block and cp design, I will forgot in added cp. I fixed all and now final version!

deleted with freeze ceiling and added tele

oops, I forgot deleted with tele-cp

have u understood everything I said? because half of the stuff is poorly or not fixed

the stuff is excellent, what your mean, I didn't poor with stuff, because that people like a stuff

Added with dark screen and change the color with unhook

This '4 jumps' is not needed, and is spammy if you walk back through it

Done

release?

It just came to me that the last part is very annoying to do without the 'shoot vertically' bind

I did it, what without the 'shoot vertically' bind

because last part for sign '3 grenades and hold'

just fixed change parts that not boring and added marking

what does it, 2 mouth ago

what purpose does this serve? you can probably achieve it without a weird switch construction

why did you completely change that first hook instead of reverting it to the original version?..

because Ravie said 'This part is still unpredictable'

speeder?

yeah it's good you changed the part ravie mentioned, but you can probably implement it in a better way

and also fixed changed the good ways and added with speeder

and what about first part?

the original version is better than the current one

TO 25 isn't used anymore

The last part is rly annoying imo

https://puu.sh/BiZBh/1d2bce1ef8.png

or better, move the rocket to the to-tele

well this is what i mean no ? xd

maybe i don't explain gud sry

I did it, I fixed the change the first part, deleted with tele and moved the grenade at last part

oh didn't see the arrow xd

oh, I things done, deleted at arrow, but could don't needed and added marked with speeders

rls pls

danil..

what

why do you keep making the first part worse and worse..

just take the very first version u made

u understand?

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/459260079254929409/477192438956556298/skippable.png

like this but without removing the hookthrough

well this is not a skip

just a nice way to do the part

yes

i'm not good at balancing part

https://puu.sh/BiZLK/a71488a443.png

but this things is hard no ?

like harder than others parts

aaa... we did this hook is difficult at first parts

and faily

its not harder than e.g. faily gores drag

should be fine for the difficulty

okay

it's easy parts, but used the endless with hook tees

?XD

just revert the first part back the original version then rls

We should be fine to fixed all and final version now

but thanks

just first part has not skipped, change parts

and not harders

you should remove the hook block

it doesn't prevent anything and it can block normal hooks

as it's below the hooktrhough

hookthrough*

Done

ready dummy 2

fixed with dark and hookthrough

this CP isn't used

'HOLD !' text has to be non-HD

entity bug

there is nothing in design here

so remove the entities-off

I fixed with backgrounds at mountains and all

can't find the bugs now

you didn't fix the 'HOLD !' text

there layer is 'Font' that enable in HD

you have to set

to

ok

Font is not hd, sorry

release now!

tomorrow ok?

yes, ok!

ready

I can’t upload to live servers

xD

done

easy edge with first part

update in non-test servers map?

I wouldn’t re-upload the map because of such an unimportant change

xD

done

did u understand what jao said xd ?

xD

oops

You can't keep reuploading the map with tiny unimportant fixes

cuz, does right already with released and not sure reuploaded, It's ok?

sorry, I don't having fix right now with first map

Unless there is a big cut it shouldn't be reuploaded 😄

Learn english rafie