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start skip - while 0 effect it may bait people so just close it please

(nvm jetpack exists - close it off)

Skippable start lines are forbidden either way. :)

• add time cps

Whole map skippable once you get jetpack and look at the two messages above.

Map channel has been moved to waiting mapper.

• fixed the above-mentioned things

skipable start

just a suggestion, u could do another jump here or smth to make the swing less sleeper

and have some cool decoration here imo

right now its boring, could be a lot more sexy if u put in some extra effort

swinging normally is awkward, i often hit right wall too early and lose speed

i guess if you want to force the halfway doublejump u can, but it kinda feels awkward

the move is cool, but u should try to find a way to make it clear that that move is intended. as of now it just looks like a normal swing

for example, maybe put freeze or kill on the bottom part of the right wall so it's more clear that if u swing normally, you will fail

in general, parts that force non-standard moves should not be deceptive about it - it should be (at least a little) clear that no alternative will work

gameplay is kinda fun otherwise

the ending lasers are a little lame. for a simple move like this, either make the stakes higher, or make the moves more complex

the design has a nice idea but can be improved upon

the jungle midground looks very awkward like this -- i wouldn't use midground in this fashion

https://mapview.patiga.eu/?ddnet=Justice+2

take an example of this map, it uses midground in a more full and organic way

not tryna plug my own maps, but you can check the way i did it in Harvest and also in c. the way i did it in tsunami is not good however. it just depends on how it's shaped

u can try using an additional layer of midground between the background and ur current layer of midground in areas of the map that don't have that much going on (empty areas with less freeze etc.)

(as a quick example)

i would also try adding lamp post doodads just for ambiance

i personally enjoyed the map, simple but fun

liked the laser parts, but would try to improve the jetpack and shotgun part to have more content IMO the jetpack and shotgun parts need more content before this can be released having shields after a single shotgun is a bit of a let-down. the jetpack part could have some interesting ideas with the jump refills, i'd try to make more parts with them;

and as others said, fix the startline skip

i personally enjoy short simple maps, but not sure about other testers, best of luck dealing with them. for now it's waiting for the fixes mentioned above ^

Thank you , I'll fix it

• Add some parts
• Modifying Existing Parts
• Change Design

• add time cps

• Some design changes

this last jump is inconsistant cuz u dont get much heigth

laser for only 3 shots kinda weak

also the swing is like way harder than most parts

the jetpack part is free

and this part is barely possible with 3 shots (idk if its actually doable) and too hard with 4 since the setup for it is bad

Thank you for the test !

But I don't think the shotgun part is difficult

I tried this a couple times but i didnt make it, maybe put +1-2 blocks to land on

out of 20 attempts I crash into this corner 10 times. it seems to me that the average player will also crash, it seems to me that this corner is not the most optimal

the first laser skips

this part seemed strange compared to others. for example on the part with the jetpack or before it - you need to do everything perfectly and everything is well calculated, but here the first jump is very strange

• Modifying the Skip
• Modify Shotgun Part
• Change the last part

Incommodious 2

the laser swing still feels bad

move the right wall 1 or 2 blocks > imo

i think map is still a bit too short

u should add some more parts in this style

with jump refills/freezejumps etc.

u only have 1 part and i think its not bad to play so u should add some more in this style

also u didnt really add much shotgun content

why not add some more going up and then back down here

even if its slightly filler, it will probably make the map better since it feels too short and unrewarding with the difficulty and amount of parts right now IMO

• rework design

• add time cps

bug fix

https://youtu.be/7eWNVZYT6Cc?si=Pdyr49XcGbq7S_Ep gameplay

i'm attracted to maps with nice design, f3

It reminds me of the one guy who was always looking for missing corners, nothing else 😄

I hope a ok`ish map with a cool design is coming!

skip

massive brain

• skip fix
• add some quads
• chnage jump repill,finishline design

• modifying some parts

Epic

• add freeze outside
• modifying some parts

first jump is spaced annoying

give a bit more space, and after the freezejump sometimes its tight to get all the way -<

(compared to the rest of the initial jumps)

! mark here maybe

• turn off entities

also the undeep is barely visible in design, pls fix

u can skip the unjetpack pretty easy, pls fix

put it right below the top undeep

u can skip shield and keep the sg

+1 shiled = -1 skip

gg!

when I load this map, I get an error:

This is the only map out of 2600 that has this error AFAIK

the bot doesn't have that issue. you might need to update your twmap

hmm okay

i played a whole map and say this map full of traps. this is not hard map but with this trap its really start be challenging. ok now i will explain the traps. first this part look at red arrow, if u have big speed, good runner will jump like this because its reflective. If you can suppress it will be ez, but question why u do it to player? just add deep like this and it will be super obvious not to jump and player don't go against reflex.

next one problem. why u allow to be here? i just dont understand. its bad way to create map, its confusing player, look like u need to use it, but actually it is just 2 sg a row, also u cant keep that all in mind and its create those skips so why u do that?

also i dont understand this loop. why i need move >then < then >? it broke the flow, instead of this better create map where u need always press d, no?

idk but for me this swing dont work, maybe im too bad. I wanna move hookable about 2 tile <

ok this trick u need add arrow or rework this one cus ofc most case ppl first try 1 way and then 2 way. cus 1 way more obvious. This is also trap. and i see same trap like this, in next parts too.

idk about this part but look like unbalanced. Too precise.

Overall, I liked our map. gl.