Mentions:

1.3mb is maybe too much

My background is self-made, not a picture.

it is still too much. After u finished mapping u should clean the blue files(unused pictures etc.). Look, after only deleting it now the file size is 785 Kb

ok im delete stilles

map looks unbalanced in some places and really plain

too tight, not good for novice player

cheatable using a dummy

it's like linear but not smooth because you can't swing it

too hard for novice, and too easy for other player, they can just jump it with speed

2 cheats, and the part itself is not much interesting imo

design bug

probably to failly for novice, (depend if it's novice 5 or low novice but the map is unbalanced)

same here

in general the map is a lot of void or solo parts, 80% is solo, and the parts can be very easy or hard (like the HT one)

this is also too hard, doing a gore save in novice

also only 1 player do all the parts, the second one do nothing.

Mention:

lets me balance parts?

you can try that

I've fixed my mistakes, please play again.

"16" by чмоня [Novice]

oops

"16" by чмоня [Novice]

its still bad

rework the map

Hey, so uh, first of all, don't rush mapping and take your time XD i have no idea how one can "fix" so many issues in just half a hour. Most likely because of that your map is with a lot of obvious visual bugs(example below(there is a lot lot more, please always re-check and test your map yourself before submitting xD))

1. Starting a map this way is not really a good idea imo, annoying to start off in big t0's and heaven for blockers

2. Too faily for a novice map, also tf? gores?

3. Breaks the rule "Novice maps should not contain any faily solo parts." You can fail in solo by falling on edge, so always place a speed-up or extend by 1 tele if it won't make the part much harder

4. important info for doing a part should be marked in entities aswell

5. Kinda hard for newbies, especially the laser part. It became much harder imo after u placed the tele's there, even thogh it's unfailable now.

6. Try to avoid parts like these if possible (one tee does the part and the other one is just slacking)

7. Boring and useless part, imo would be better without

8. I'm not really a fan of losing weapons instantly after just a part, really boring and uncreative way of doing things, feels more like a souless way to fill up space to make the map longer to me. But again, it might be just me, maybe it's okay nowadays idk

The map is still unbalanced, honestly you should just rework it from 0 keeping in mind all of the feedback from this channel, and actually to try understanding the issues instead of rushing xD good luck

I'm not really a fan of losing weapons instantly after just a part, really boring and uncreative way of doing things, feels more like a souless way to fill up space to make the map longer to me. But again, it might be just me, maybe it's okay nowadays idk

maps have been declined for that reason by yours truly by the way.

dont use weapons only for a single part, or have the part be long enough for the weapon to matter.

What about 23shots or weapon finals?

You can't really compare weapon finals with that, it's the intended mechanic to constantly switch between all weapons

17?