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Ok map

I also don't understand this part. Also please add changelog

If possible I'd like to talk ingame

-bug optimized the art

(ignore this)

Could you just tell me how to do the first parts?

I like the part. imo you should make so you need to catch after throw instead of the tee landing in the hole. would flow better :D

With this hook speed, any catch with distance > 5 tiles is extremely hard

Maybe just a hookthrough 1 Tile over the tele if you know were i mean

I won't like any moving hooks at this hook speed, but this flow indeed isn't well. I think maybe just let the tee exit from the bottom

A recommendation from me, you don't have to do it if you don't want to, but you could add something to reinforce that you should do this, like an animation or something similar.

you have only used this hook fixing gimmick once even you introduced it

corner bugs

almost all bushes have this design issue

grasses are bugged

design erro

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i think isnt unique error but if dont understan u can see better the brushes in this image, probably if u pu full blakc bg u can see all errors of design

I think it's better to fix this

Could you do a gameplay of the entire map? The map is very confusing.

unnecesary double tele

add Turn off entities

again

It's very weird to hold the hook here

The last part is unpleasant in terms of timings

I don't like the presence of hammer jumps on the map and the fact that there are only 2 of them. I would remove them because the map is dedicated to something else entirely

The fact that this mechanic is used only once per map is very strange, it should either be removed or added to a large number of parts

The only sideways fly on the map, which is also unpleasant due to life freeze, it's better to delete it

This parts are annoying and unfairly difficult, and it's also hard to figure out how to do them

These parts have strange execution setups and don't fit into the overall flow of the map

very easy and uninteresting part

strange appearance and is used once per map

In general, I think this is a decline, but I will say that the idea is very interesting. If we work out the setups for the parts better and improve the readability, I think the map will be much better

and I think better disable the setting to play without a team

There are also a lot of design bugs here, especially in the bushes

There are also unused envelopes on the map that should be removed

visual bugs(only a small part of them are just examples)

Well, for now I'm still of the opinion that this is a decline, but we'll see how the edits can change the situation

i liked this map fyi. tested with yaccre but will look again wheni have time

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Inactive, meaning the last update was 5 months ago.