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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xZDL87Xlerk

watched the video and not a huge fan of the auto-like parts but otherwise looks like some cool ideas i also like the way you designed freeze

youtube acts weird so I can't watch but thumbnail is cool, 9/10

even if decline, im happi now

i like bg

vena is coming, hide

desing is so cool

IAM HERE

more seriously i'm like louis i'm not fan of the auto or semi auto

using 1 hookable on many spot are rly meh, here for example depending on the speed you can fall on the left, or in the left side of the unfreeze but can't hold jump or you touch the freeze

this is the example of semi auto i don't like, you fall from a press forward, have an unfreeze and a swing but if you hold you goes in the wall

beena

the swing is easy but the hook is meh

free 3s

cammodude ragequit

i have other things to do

all the swing and the position of the hookable feel awkward 1 good placement could be much cleaner and a better swing with the freeze adapted

you have to run on the left tile, it kinda bait and doesn't feel nice if you dont jump in the middle with the laser

terrible jump

(i go eat i'll do the rest after)

i rly like how u did outside unhook structure here

wouldve been cool if u did more circular forms in other placesa as well

kinda random

the jump is so early, could add tele to give a better intuition and the last hook with 1 tile is meh + the swing is a bit weird on the setup

auto part, doesn't looks that great for an auto, and 6 s freeze with classic jump

doing a good hook = die

not fan of repetitive classic deep jump this set up have 0 flow, can't go up directly or need good hook (but the setup don't give it) the edge down is meh and the last hook when you fall is bad to, can have to much speed and it's a 1 tile

flow

same here the unfreeze is a bait because you need the dj, so it's better to put it on the floor

also part don't connect well, you fall every time with a micro part, and a bit unbalanced

i can't restart well ...

everytime it give the illusion of a speed part, but get cancel, here again mega slow because we to to much on the right, and then the jump have to be good because most of the time we hit the tile and slow again then take the speed from upper

here the setup is not great, you can do the same part but with a better swing, and maybe i'm bad but i always hit the freeze at the end, again it break the flow

structure is good in generale, just some kill tiles are ugly, in all the map you have full line of kill tile so why not respect it everywhere, some spot have some random placement for the kill tile like this one

i like the style of the design, maybe a bit dark, or need more contrast, for example here with the back ground and the tele and the deep

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2h17m

rip

i liked some of your laser parts and the entities structure, continue mapping and you'll make great maps 😅

xD

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in a few words, i fixed said above