#Red_Land
"Red Land" by Alive_Mous5 [Novice]
DDNet 02/02/2021 4:56 PM
@Mous5

this is your map's testing channel! Post map updates here and remember to follow our mapper rules: https://ddnet.tw/rules

JoaoGardaBro 02/02/2021 6:17 PM

hmm put a normal freeze block in yellows parts

wsike🦩 02/02/2021 6:44 PM

map is too hard for novice, first solo part made me rq

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 9:43 PM

these look too much like speeders

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 9:44 PM

tee can get stuck here, not good on novice!!!!

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 9:45 PM

t0 skip here

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 9:48 PM

this solo is moderate 3/5 star diffculty

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 9:51 PM

turn off entities

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 9:54 PM

nerf the solo,

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 9:54 PM

ive been playing it for 6 minutes

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 9:54 PM

way to hard for novice

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 9:56 PM

novice players don't know how to hammer throw

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 9:58 PM

dont do this

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 10:02 PM

skip

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 10:04 PM

remove the inside of tele

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 10:06 PM

too much gores

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 10:08 PM

and too hard

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 10:09 PM

couldve been a good part, but it was too hard

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 10:12 PM

this part is good :D

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 10:12 PM

not this

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 10:15 PM

keep this

PopCorn181 02/02/2021 10:19 PM

for me, this part doesn't work

Mous5 02/03/2021 2:00 AM

when i played novice there was hammer throw :??

Mous5 02/03/2021 2:01 AM
@PopCorn181

anyway, thx u, gonna fix

Mous5 02/03/2021 2:25 AM

there you need shoot laser while dummy holding jump D

Mous5 02/03/2021 2:33 AM

fixed

Boti. 02/03/2021 5:24 AM

Make some easy jetpack solo parts

JoaoGardaBro 02/03/2021 6:07 AM
@PopCorn181

I wanted to play a map with you pop, but I see that you live a little far from me, so yours or my ping will be bad

Mous5 02/03/2021 6:38 AM

already

Mous5 02/03/2021 7:29 AM

some small changes and nice light xd

Mous5 02/03/2021 11:06 AM

xd

PopCorn181 02/03/2021 8:44 PM
@Mous5

at the laser part the laser kept shooting through my dummy

Mous5 02/04/2021 2:10 AM

i'm very sorry for that awful bug, now this must work

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:20 PM

the problem with this map, is that it has a 2015 bro design

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:22 PM

have to fix the background, and the design of the map, they are two problems that will hinder the launch of the map

Mous5 02/05/2021 3:34 PM

how fix background? give advice pleasee

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:35 PM
@Mous5

change to stay more updated, as examples: look my bg

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:36 PM

or you can create during the day, with mountains, or in the afternoon with forests, whichever suits the map

Mous5 02/05/2021 3:36 PM

idk, add animated sunlight with mountain will be enough?

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:37 PM

hmmm

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:37 PM

It depends largely

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:37 PM

you have to play more new maps, novices, and you will see how the design of bg is nowadays

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:38 PM

and also update own map design

Mous5 02/05/2021 3:39 PM

oke, what's new novice maps you can recommend?

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:39 PM

look, the design on the parts is not very cool

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:39 PM

news

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:39 PM

tip

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:39 PM

firewatch

Mous5 02/05/2021 3:40 PM

too hard, i'm potato at design

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:41 PM

but this has to change, of course if you want a map released, I trust you, I know it can improve

Mous5 02/05/2021 3:43 PM

hol up, you mean entire design bad or that freeze bad xd

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:47 PM

it's not that the design is bad, it's because it's old, this is 2015 design, that's what I mean

Mous5 02/05/2021 3:47 PM

then okay, i get it

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:47 PM

he is already outdated

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:47 PM

🐧 ok

Mous5 02/05/2021 3:48 PM

thx for that, next day gonna break my skill in design xd

JoaoGardaBro 02/05/2021 3:48 PM

np xd

PopCorn181 02/06/2021 1:46 PM
@Mous5

Some new novices you can play are on ddnet.tw. https://ddnet.tw/ranks/novice/ you can get inspiration here :)

Mous5 02/07/2021 5:46 AM
Mous5 02/07/2021 5:46 AM

make background with sun

louis 02/09/2021 4:03 PM

$decline

louis 02/09/2021 4:03 PM

sorry, this map's gameplay is not good enough to be released

louis 02/09/2021 4:03 PM

the structure is ok and design all good, but the parts are too "ddmax"-y in the sense that they are very repetitive and kinda bland

louis 02/09/2021 4:04 PM
louis 02/09/2021 4:04 PM

parts like this where its just 50 corner hooks arent the best, u need to think about some cool movements and put them into parts

louis 02/09/2021 4:04 PM

u can look at recent released maps to see some idea of what we're looking for

louis 02/09/2021 4:05 PM

regardless i think u have the ability to make good maps but u just need to put more effort into your parts. also try not to make the whole map a bunch of straight lines, u can add some turns here and there to create more variety

Mous5 02/10/2021 9:42 AM
@louis

what parts you liked in this map, i can add them in new xd?

louis 02/10/2021 2:00 PM

eh if im being honest most of the parts here were a little plain, i'd just come up with some new ones instead of using ones here

louis 02/10/2021 2:00 PM

the ninja solo was kinda cool, u could make smth cool with that