https://ddnet.tw/testmaps/?map=9Nine

ah

I got the map wrong

😅

sorry

2 to teles enough

unbalanced map - some easy parts some harder parts

unlock dont work

dummy too fast

okay

The speed of the dummy makes it go through the unlock tile

spawned in same tele tile - pushed dummy up into back.

add switch doors here so you quickly know your progress and not going into wrong doors

part 7 is a moderate part and part 8 is brutal 3-4

needs cp here, i actually failed because of that (dummy had no cp, spawned out of reach at spawn)

you need to move unlock team tile a bit, otherwise the team is still locked. i actually failed the map after playing because of that 😦

freeze should be a spike like you have it on other parts

mark unfreeze here

you use tiny slopes sometimes, even though most slopes are the diagonal ones. try to consistent

there are many design inconstencies. try to rework them

is the switch reset at spawn necessary

better to use cp here rather than have this odd setup with cfrm and cto

better choice to put hookthru instead of the 4-directional stoppers here

(the two at the bottom should be stoppers tho)

i suggest do add little doors here so you can see which ones are open

idk if you want this, but it's cheatable (dummy doesn't need to go >)

cheatable with rocket

unused group, you can delete it

the to tele is annoying, happened multiple times, that i bounced off my dummy into the tele at the top

this shouldn't happen right?

there is unhookable that covers tele

Another thing: if you do the 9th gate at first, you lose your dummy and get stuck

kinda cheatable, you can laser from down (dummy presses d and jump)

oh

sorry for the map, is my first map and idk how make some things

what do you mean by some things? the testers try to help you on things you missed so, go through the list here and try to fix the mentioned problems

in this moment i cant fix the map, but i think what u haves a some good points for fix the map, I can barely fix everything I will

are you goin to fix the map?

$waiting

sorry for the wait, here is the map with all fixed

now that the back teleport is right here makes the shotgun fly start pretty weird. i suggest you but the back tele where i put the blue mark

missing freeze and teleport corners

the design is still inconsistent, you are using 3 different corner styles on map (and forgot a few) so i suggest you go over these and try to only use one type of corner

isn't better this back?

dummy or player could miss checkpoint and spawn somewhere else

idon't undestand...

look at the cp tiles. (the floating square). you could drag dummy or go underneath it and don't collect the chekpoint

just make it so that there are no checkpoint gaps

wrong corner

look at the cp tiles. (the floating square). you could drag dummy or go underneath it and don't collect the chekpoint

im sorry, but i still don't understand..

I just checked it, i am very stupid. it works perfectly how you've got it

sorry haha ✌️

okay

you're back cp how you did it works even better, great idea

yea

Fixed little part with design bugs and better gameplay

Little changes in the 1st part, and fixed design bugs.

The map needs a bit of reworking before it will be ready imo. Parts do feel rather fun but they differ in difficulty quite a bit. Here are my thoughts:

Add one more tele here would be nice imo but not needed

This part was a bit too dull after the first one and it is much easier.

Path up is usually back so I would change the way to get dummy in here, but if you keep it the way it is definitely need to lower the dummy^ text as it isn't on screen by default.

Killing dummy location shouldn't be in a part, it should be out of all the parts before the end.

This part is really hard what i assume is the intended way and too easy to cheat by lasering dummy off the top. I think it needs to be changed.

Remove this start, switches start on by default so this isn't needed.

The checkpoint markings in freeze should be lighter like the checkpoints out of freeze imo. Try not have any freeze overlap them.

Also don't have to mark the checkpoint at the start of every part.

This cp should look like all the other checkpoints, it is weird that this is the only one marked like this.

The following layers should be in hd instead.

I think you should have more exit teleports as you can't see the roof so you won't really know where you are, rather have a different teleport for leaving each part.

Back tps at the end of parts should take you out of the part and not just back to the beginning of it.

Ok summary of my thoughts on each of the 9 parts:

1. Was ok.
2. Too easy compared to 1 and rather boring.

3. Shotgun fly was too hard making it alot harder than 1
4. A bit harder than part 1 and ends kinda dull but is ok
5. Didn't like the way you used dummy here and i found the edges boring.
6. Cool part but really ez in comparison to part 1
7. Part was ok.
8. Part was ok.
9. Too easy to cheat, too hard if you don't cheat.

Design feels like it could use some work too, the clouds could use some animation or maybe being bigger might help, not sure really what it needs but it looks a bit weird to me.

You got some good ideas but I think this map will need quite a bit of reworking before it is ready.

1.- Fixed all the screenshots 2.- Fixed part 2 3.- Half reworked part 3 4.- Reworked part 5 5.- Part 6 more hardest 6.- Half reworked part 9 7.- Better design 8.- Colorful animations in the "9Nine" and "By: Yto" 9.- New start line and finish line

Thanks

for the test.

My english isn't the best btw..

Don't worry about it :D

😄

Why there are doors at part 9?

Some people would do parts as they want and not in order

okay, i go to fix that

aah

is because in the last part dummy die

$decline

mapper asked for it