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another sasha map gg

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no it's not mine

pls stop spaming map + even if you make a new maps it's based on the same parts, so i think it's better to work on 1 map only, and upgrade this one for example, but take your time you rush too much and even forgot to put the tele here

it looks like a dummy parts but can just fly for good player, and not much interesting for novice player

this is used on other maps too

yes, but last time when I redid the map and sent a new file, they simply ignored me

the "can't hook other" is not needed, + you can find bettter way than shield and laser again and again

Can I send an updated map now?

I saw this was used on another map so I decided to use it too

why do u make new maps all the time?

stoppers are not good, you can be in it and be blocked at the end

i think it's better to work on 1 maps and upgrade now, so you can understand better some problems, because some decline don't gives all the details

Should I throw the updated map into this chat and attach screenshots of the changes to it?

but you progress the space and global structure is better now, some part are more developed, and you can continue to devolope them more

yes but wait the review and take your time for the update, test many times

kinda the same parts 2 times in a row + the laser on your mate is a mecanic a bit slow and not much interesting

Last time the testers rejected the card very quickly and I didn't have time to update it

many spot where the unfreeze goes inside the wall

But similar desks are used on other maps too.

it was accidental, it does not affect the gameplay

yes i know and it was a problems, but they decline for many reason, and didn't gave details but this is also a problem in the gameplay

some spawn placement are weird, don't put them horizontally + it's a 2p maps so when the player are separated, only 1 spawn is needed, not 2

try to work on design too, the colors made the tiles hard to see, hard to see the HT compare to unhook, and hard to see the unfreeze

hard to mention everythings, so for the gameplay try to test every parts and try develop by yourself and be creative

the errors have been corrected

not rejected yet?

no

thats vertical

Yep i'm stupid

I not sure but smth wrong with logo, low resolution?

its still didnt fixed. i think this channel need to move to waiting.

its just stretched

(also that was alot of unused images, please fix)

i also checked other mentions and its didnt fixed too.

i also dont see any mention about spacing, some place a tight. avoid 3 hole tiels like here, you have the same problems in the next parts.

No, I stretched it upwards on purpose

I removed the second teleporter, what's wrong?

3 holes is not a little, it is enough to throw another player

why? i fixed everything that was mentioned except the second mention

Fixed the "Funday" text, fixed minor bugs, added time checkpoints

ah mb, i didnt reload map( this and this msg are was not actual, sorry.

i just say what i think and what can improve your map in my opinion. U can don't listen me if dont agree with me, im not a tester.

also dont put tp like this.

ok

I fixed everything I could, waiting for the tester's response

near tp put "chill zone" its 2 tiels on any direction from tp.smth like this is better

try to avoid special tiels for example here. u can do this part without stoppers, or with tp. in this case stoppers always worse then tp.

1 also some spacing problems too. no reason for 3 tiles. 2 but here u give laser and 3 tiles in this case is good reason, so u can keep it.

i dont like this part at all better rework it

grass bug

cool place, I don't know what you don't like

its too hard for novice and its not that unique

if you make walls hookable i give it a pass

Not a very difficult place, there are more difficult maps

any beginner can pass this in no more than ten attempts

in no more than 500

are u out of ur mind?

it's easy

4 u

novice ppl have strong hooks, so its hard for them to kog

Its pretty easy

noobs hook for longer, thats the problem

if you want to nerf if then remove the freeze/tp except the top 4 tiles on each grass cube

yes

or add hook to walls

pls stop spaming map + even if you make a new maps it's based on the same parts, so i think it's better to work on 1 map only ddnet bot dont have merge channel tools ? like u choose new one and old one and just copy all from new to old and delete new one?

Idk who made the map but do this: add freeze on the walls or else the kog part is way too easy

You'd struggle

its a novice map

but adding a few freezes so you cant just cheese it is a good idea

help, im dead

1. This part is harder then previous parts and even some that are after, you can fix it by adding platform where orange rectangle is.
2. You could add more unhookable in red rectangle in case accidental hooks.
3. These 2 laser parts are pretty long and repeat twice with almost no changes, i think you could make 2 lasers per part (maybe deleted vertical ones) and make them a little different.
4. This thing appears in at least 3 parts, might need to make it a little more interesting.
5. You can delete teleports that are inside red rectangle.
6. All images that are blue are unsused and can be deleted.
7. You can make

image external to save some file size.

8. I advise adding parallax to your background, to make that you should make a new group, put some of your background layer (e.g. layer with your clouds) inside the group and then changing the para X and para Y value (it's 100 by default, 0 will follow player for ever so good value for clouds is 1-5)

I do not agree that it is necessary to reduce the parts with a laser, in fact they are not very huge. There are almost no such moments anywhere. And also this moment is interesting.

Fixed the errors pointed out by

agree with testers, else choice is final. $decline

He didn't say it was a serious mistake. If it was a serious mistake, I would definitely fix it. But it's really not that long.

youre not smart

stop pretending

just do it 👍

no insult here. for the laser, not needed to cut it, but develop it and also no need to put shield everytime 1 laser for each is enough, and fixing the problem of "the player can solo if he have laser just do this"

there is always some way to fix which are better than adding entities

i aint insulting. i said to him that he should stop pretending that he is smarter than me, bcs he isnt.

ok?

how is this still here, lasering your dummy are boring/ not interesting + stoppers useless + design indicate freeze in stoppers that doesn't exist

so you're saying you are smarter, implying he is dumber, it's a form of insult. and who know if you are rly smarter ?

im here longer and i didnt want to insult him. i also have my own rights, which means i can tell you to stop pinging me.

your right have nothing related with the first problem ? and i was just reminding to be respectful even if you didn't mean to insult him

ok can you stop pinfing

yes of course

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maybe try to work on the structure too, for example at the end you have some floating blocks that doesn't exist for the rest of the map (exect previous gore)

this empty space feel weird + the filler is kinda useless

can hook directly here on this filler

for the upper filler, idk what to think it's fine but not much interesting, but for novice maybe ok, need more opinion and the last laser after the big laser part feel like a filling part, it's just 1 classic laser.

this stopper could be easily replace, like this for example

many part are repetitive too like hooking from under and that it

or some hammer when the tee is behind the wall on the ground

Wow, before that, one of the testers wrote that it's better to make them go faster on the surface.

This is normal, similar parts are present on other maps.

I don't quite understand what's wrong here.

Similar moments at the start are also present on some maps.

ok

ok

so by your answers using similiar parts that are present on other maps is good thing?

Is it bad? All maps are of the same type, and all maps lack the same locations. Isn't it?

i don't understand a thing

I just communicate through a translator and the translation is not reliable.

I wanted to say that all the maps have the same parts.

not talking about the stopper but the part itself, it's repetitive to do the same thing even if it goes fast

1 of the gaol of testing it to have a map clean, and it pass by having clean entities, imagine spaming switch or other it will looks bad, it's the same for useless stoppers

yes some have have some space or introduction with some few jumps, but here it's not well done, just a long tunnel, and the filler is not interesting.

Still, I didn't understand what I needed to fix. Maybe my translator translates the text incorrectly.

ok

having the map in the cleanest way possible -> less entities (avoid using stoppers) -> on this part 1 stopper was useless so you can change it and delete the stopper.

A player must be dragged to this stopper.

yes but you can develop and find a way to have the same part, doing the same movement without the stopper, like this for example

ok

Fixed the errors pointed out by

repetitive parts are the same, the big laser part is not fix (+ too hard said simple and doshik) the 'classic laser' i mentioned you just added a second one instead of developing some part could be develop more the last gore with the different structure didn't change, the inside part structure for the 2 last part didn't change the cheatable filler is still cheatable

some little change are ok, but too much problems in the fix, and you are rushing the fix, not taking time to check if everything asked is fix, or taking time in general for the quality and the developement of the map.

for now it's a decline

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