https://ddnet.tw/testmaps/?map=Moonrush

put a "turn off entities "here

add unfreeze and "turn off entities"

add unfreeze or change the part

add unfreeze here maybe

problem here xd

ah i see xd

all fixed

moon -> hd

u can do this without edge hooks

boring deep

map is like stronghold, back in time etc.. but very boring parts

i suggest to make freeze lighter, i cant even see tele without entities

boring deep, missing undeep suns

for your first map this is pretty good

but it also seems experimental

ie it seems like you focused on the mapping itself rather than making good parts

basically all parts are very basic

what you should do is adding little twists to existing parts or coming up with original parts

something thats entertaining to play

also, parts like the edgehook part dont fit to the rest at all

since youre good with the basic mapping techniques now, the next step is to make good gameplay

this map would need to be entirely reworked to get released, so better start a new one, making sure its fun to play 😉

$decline

Danke für die Tipps.

ich denke das es noch lange dauert bis ich mich verbessere.

kommt dann iwan die nächste xD