#Narcissus_Garden
"Narcissus Garden" by YoDa [Moderate]
DDNet 07/24/2023 6:38 PM
@yoda0059

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DDNet 07/24/2023 6:38 PM
yoda0059 07/25/2023 12:27 AM

add time cps i did not undertand what from-tele mean

shengyan1256 07/25/2023 2:15 AM

this is from-tele

shengyan1256 07/25/2023 2:16 AM

this is to-tele

shengyan1256 07/25/2023 2:16 AM

that means u have a from-tele (such as number 1), but you didn't place a to-tele 1

yoda0059 07/25/2023 3:45 AM

hm, ok thx

yoda0059 07/25/2023 3:46 AM
coke1465 07/26/2023 3:49 PM

map is full of bugs

coke1465 07/26/2023 3:50 PM

$waiting

yoda0059 07/26/2023 5:38 PM

bugs?

yoda0059 07/26/2023 5:39 PM

what kind of bug?

coke1465 07/26/2023 5:58 PM
yoda0059 07/26/2023 6:04 PM

hum, ok

yoda0059 07/26/2023 6:10 PM
thortillat.d.m 07/27/2023 11:22 PM

freeze messing

thortillat.d.m 07/27/2023 11:23 PM

hookabe messing

thortillat.d.m 07/27/2023 11:25 PM

u did it in purpose?

thortillat.d.m 07/27/2023 11:28 PM

theres more

thortillat.d.m 07/27/2023 11:38 PM

freeze mess

thortillat.d.m 07/27/2023 11:38 PM
thortillat.d.m 07/27/2023 11:39 PM
thortillat.d.m 07/27/2023 11:48 PM
thortillat.d.m 07/27/2023 11:53 PM

-corners

yoda0059 07/28/2023 3:08 PM

I will fix, thanks

yoda0059 07/28/2023 3:15 PM
  • fixed all above
thortillat.d.m 08/01/2023 12:28 AM
thortillat.d.m 08/01/2023 12:28 AM

u can just deleted that tele

thortillat.d.m 08/01/2023 12:43 AM

put the unfinity hook more right

thortillat.d.m 08/01/2023 12:45 AM

u hav to rehook at the with strong

thortillat.d.m 08/01/2023 12:46 AM

at the end*

thortillat.d.m 08/01/2023 12:48 AM
thortillat.d.m 08/01/2023 12:48 AM

with weak

thortillat.d.m 08/01/2023 12:59 AM

freeze messing

thortillat.d.m 08/01/2023 1:02 AM

why that hooktrough

thortillat.d.m 08/01/2023 1:03 AM

u never hit the unfreeze

vena6080 08/01/2023 1:46 PM

many problems on the map : bad flow on the map : useless unfreeze when you do the part

vena6080 08/01/2023 1:46 PM

or here the end of the part

vena6080 08/01/2023 1:48 PM

most of the part have cp/tele problems, you can cheat some part by falling in the tele... here is 2 differents cp + tp 5 + when you go back to this part you can cheat the endlesshook ...

  • the endless off have a bad possition when you drag the player + the next part is unbalanced compare to the other part
vena6080 08/01/2023 1:58 PM

again cp problem : tele 8 and cp8 are confuable + cp8 is in 3 part (to not go through with ninja) (but the cp is kinda useless anyway) the position of cp 6 is weird cp 9 in 2 part (bottom part is useless) +you can go through shield

vena6080 08/01/2023 2:01 PM

the real way is uninteresting

  • the 2 aled way is a bad idea btw they are 2 forced aled in the map (that is bad + in moderate i don't see the point of forcing aled)
  • again a cp 10 and a tele 9 wich is useless + cp 12 can be a teleport
vena6080 08/01/2023 2:06 PM

it's better to not use that much shield just for 1 rocket again cp and tele have problem between cp10 tele 13, cp 12 is useless + if you fall in the tele 12 you go to next part without transition ???? the timecp is not well placed +you can skip the solo entities (in the solo, I already explain that you can cheat the endless)

Jurai! 08/01/2023 2:06 PM

thats a old map

Jurai! 08/01/2023 2:06 PM

like from 2016-2017 year

vena6080 08/01/2023 2:07 PM

useless blockers

vena6080 08/01/2023 2:11 PM

tele 14 on the ground left is messy a freeze is missing in the blockers tele 15 and 16 could be 1 tele part is kinda weird using a telehookable for no reason ( you add to much entities)

vena6080 08/01/2023 2:15 PM

the jetpack is in the solo but not all the way up it's confusing and again cp/tele problems

vena6080 08/01/2023 2:18 PM

in design : add the information that you lose the telegun

vena6080 08/01/2023 2:18 PM

not clear in design

vena6080 08/01/2023 2:20 PM

too much problems overall not a good flow on many parts...

vena6080 08/01/2023 2:20 PM

$decline

DDNet 08/01/2023 2:20 PM

An internal error occurred

pipou_tw 08/01/2023 4:18 PM

$reset

DDNet 08/01/2023 4:18 PM

An internal error occurred

pipou_tw 08/01/2023 4:18 PM

$reset

Jurai! 08/01/2023 4:42 PM
vena6080 08/01/2023 8:44 PM

$decline

DDNet 08/01/2023 8:44 PM

An internal error occurred

yoda0059 08/01/2023 11:45 PM

I understood, and I realized that there are many teleportation errors because I didn't handle them properly. There are design flaws as well, and some parts are easier to fix. But the teleportation part got a bit confusing. I believe you will reject the map until you fix the bug. So I won't send the fixed map again. Thank you for your feedback, it's good to always improve in the next creations.

steinchen99 08/02/2023 5:09 PM

I remember testing your first solo map And I must say that you improved by alot :D

yoda0059 08/02/2023 7:22 PM

🫶

pipou_tw 08/02/2023 9:45 PM

$decline

pipou_tw 08/02/2023 9:45 PM

$reset

pipou_tw 08/02/2023 9:45 PM

$decline

learath2 08/03/2023 7:40 AM

$archive_imm