#Jorge
"Jorge" by DogCaramelo [Solo]
DDNet 03/19/2024 10:10 PM
@z_eighty

this is your map's testing channel! Post map updates here and remember to follow our mapper rules: https://ddnet.org/rules

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z_eighty 03/19/2024 10:14 PM
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DDNet 03/19/2024 10:14 PM

Include a changelog after uploading map updates (preferably with screenshots).

vena6080 03/19/2024 10:16 PM

this is low effort mapping, creating a short map doesn't mean 10min mapping

vena6080 03/19/2024 10:17 PM

structure in random depending where you are (for the teleport, freeze and even unhook with this random hole. the speeder are useless

z_eighty 03/19/2024 10:17 PM

the map was really created to be short, I wanted to make a map for beginners to know how to be a rocket, so there is almost no failure, if you don't refuse before I can make it even bigger

vena6080 03/19/2024 10:17 PM

part cheatable, then randomly having blue tele, (i shown the structure changing between teleport)

z_eighty 03/19/2024 10:18 PM

hmmm ok

vena6080 03/19/2024 10:19 PM

y i see, but it looks mapped in 10 min, even a short map need time, here the flow is not fully smooth, the structure is not coherent

vena6080 03/19/2024 10:19 PM

for now i'll put waiting but idk what to do with this map

vena6080 03/19/2024 10:19 PM

$waiting

z_eighty 03/19/2024 10:20 PM

ok, I'll try to increase it and take some skips

z_eighty 03/19/2024 11:33 PM
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DDNet 03/19/2024 11:33 PM

Include a changelog after uploading map updates (preferably with screenshots).

z_eighty 03/19/2024 11:37 PM

I added more parts

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z_eighty 03/19/2024 11:37 PM

what?

z_eighty 03/19/2024 11:40 PM
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DDNet 03/19/2024 11:41 PM
DDNet 03/19/2024 11:41 PM

Include a changelog after uploading map updates (preferably with screenshots).

joel.9524 03/19/2024 11:44 PM

missing a block

joel.9524 03/19/2024 11:44 PM

useless because you can go right with enough speed

joel.9524 03/19/2024 11:44 PM

possible to skip still

joel.9524 03/19/2024 11:44 PM

possible to skip

joel.9524 03/19/2024 11:45 PM

also still a very little map and could be more smooth

joel.9524 03/19/2024 11:45 PM

but we hope to see you soon with a rework

z_eighty 03/19/2024 11:46 PM

ok, but could you explain this to me? I just can't find where this error is

z_eighty 03/19/2024 11:48 PM

are you saying it probably $decline?

z_eighty 03/19/2024 11:49 PM

Maybe I fixed the errors above

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z_eighty 03/19/2024 11:49 PM

xddd

z_eighty 03/19/2024 11:50 PM

teles fixed

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z_eighty 03/19/2024 11:52 PM

skip fixed

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z_eighty 03/19/2024 11:53 PM
@joel.9524

Could you give me an example of smooth?

z_eighty 03/20/2024 12:02 AM

ok, finally I REALLY got the jumps off

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joel.9524 03/20/2024 12:33 AM

thought already that VeNa would do immeditly a decline but it looks like he is giving you a secon chance

z_eighty 03/20/2024 12:34 AM

finally... I suffer a lot in this world, Neymar and I 😭

joel.9524 03/20/2024 12:34 AM

I will look later in the map(maybe in ~18h) it's getting late in my country😴

joel.9524 03/20/2024 12:35 AM

first sry....,but still even with a decline you can send the map again

z_eighty 03/20/2024 12:35 AM

ok, but can I tell you what I should still do? to make the map smoother or more acceptable, etc.

z_eighty 03/20/2024 12:42 AM

.

z_eighty 03/20/2024 12:43 AM

on this map, even if it is declined, I will try to change it later

vena6080 03/20/2024 1:14 PM

this freeze is still not the same structure

vena6080 03/20/2024 1:15 PM

the hook placed at the exact range where you can't hook if you are wall + part still cheatable

vena6080 03/20/2024 1:16 PM
vena6080 03/20/2024 1:17 PM

design/entities bug (not the only design bug in the map)

vena6080 03/20/2024 1:17 PM

going in tele for the next part is meh

vena6080 03/20/2024 1:18 PM

bad utilization of blockers, the part is kinda the same as the part cheatable + depending where you hook the swing is not rly smooth

vena6080 03/20/2024 1:19 PM

the only kill tiles on the map, kinda weird + you can't even touch it cause of stoppers, bad utilization. + the part is not rly interesting + again going in tele for next part

vena6080 03/20/2024 1:20 PM

again too much stoppers + part cheatable

vena6080 03/20/2024 1:20 PM

tele 10 cheatable + not rly interesting the switch part can be done without rocket and just right left right left, is not interesting + again going in tele for the finish when you can put the finish

vena6080 03/20/2024 1:22 PM

try to map with more space, take time to develop idea and parts, test it many time, and ask your friend to test it, try to not use too much entities when it's not needed.

vena6080 03/20/2024 1:22 PM

$decline

joel.9524 03/20/2024 6:07 PM

half of that I already said, but okay