Hi, looks like nice map 🙂 missing some freeze here
Why unfreeze deep ? + it looks a bit ugly compared to simple white sun
Less / No arrows ? Except laser
Freeze not removed
oh god the design
where contrast
Yeah bg is too dark imo
In the beginning y can get dj like this
although it may not be a problem xd
when u use the aoe orange rifle gun gameskin ._.
this is bad
please fix design
i would test for design bugs but i cant fix what i cant see
u dont need the middle shield (to the direct left of rocket)
entities bug
change all unfreeze marking
change all solo&unsolo marking
more differents between hook and ht
definitively too repetitive
chnage this marking
make more difference between telegun and notelegun
put all switch in respawns points
wrong respawn
one of two tele is wrong (respawn 21 missing)
looks not really interesting
delete all double freeze (game + front/switch) and all freeze in tele
Check all corner and fix it
delete unused
need to mark stoppers
tele and kill tile need to be differents
only one or two ninja is enough
Wow
Maybe stop reupload every 5 min but only when you finished modifications ;)
most parts need rework. it's too "ddmax"-y
spectrate ur map 3 min 1 too darky 2 troll nf it is enough form to test this map
I dont know about this map... there is sooooo much you have to change, I didnt even look on the design on its own (just marks you have to make). Most of the parts are default and boring and some others just repeat or are drawn out. Often there is even missing space for t0. While testing I dont see how this map should make fun at all, sorry to say that. Here some examples:
You just have to make the same part 2 times + the middle part is quite annoying
add more space, imagine 10 tees there
quite surprising part add a mark you should take care
add some unfreeze
this is pretty hard in the middle of the map + annoying without ht at corner
its annoying to hit that hole + you can skip it
compared to the "good" start design
the finish looks quite lame
the part is quite boring and feels like a filler
bug
this is bad mapped you can just ninja down rest on laser and do the same again 3 times ...
apart from the fact that I don't even know if the part is possible, its unnecessary long, just why
almost everything looks like deep, tele or this jetpack mark
stoppers are not marked
mark, that the door is only open for 10sec or delete it and just make a normal switch
maybe add some ht instead of hook
you forget to switch telegun off here
i dont know, sometimes you make corners for design sometimes not but this just look bad
there is a shield missing in the middle. Now you can skip whole part with double grenade (and yes it works i testet it .-.)
you need to shoot twice for part, but you can bug into stoppers while doing the 1 shot, its quite annoying
this is not creative at all just make the same thing
not very creative
same part drawn out again
default stuff
boring endless jumps
its just the same part copy + paste
just annoying to hit the sg
why dont add some tele to deny fail here
tele looks like deep like some posts with jetpack before
when you want to hook your partner out of part you always hit solo, its quite annoying
qhy just tele outside and not in the middle
just work with cp here (and in some other parts too)
you can just skip shields, maybe just do 1 ninja at start and delete all other ninjas/ shields
again just repeatet the same thing 4 times...
Like I said, I dont know about this map. In my opinion it needs a whole rework in gameplay + design.
But there are always other opinions and maybe I am horrible wrong.
design is terrible - can't see anything
I'll review the design, and see what I do with some parts
@Qywinc
this map is really messy both gameplay and design wise. feels like experimental stuff without a clear concept. there is also a lot very basic and repetitive stuff. you should try to work on it by getting more used to mapping and looking at released maps to get an idea about what a map needs to get released. you should not try to fix this map but make a new map with a polished concept in mind. you will have good chances to get a release then 👍
$decline