#Unteechable
"Unteechable" by Bennji [Brutal]
DDNet 01/08/2021 11:35 PM
@Bennji | Mats

this is your map's testing channel! Post map updates here and remember to follow our mapper rules: https://ddnet.tw/rules

Silex 01/09/2021 12:49 AM

Seems like you played to much stronghold and bit/bitd. First parts look like cheap fakes, i'm against releasing maps like that. Most parts are just stolen and/or changed a bit. Not much new stuff or creativity to see there imo.

コズミック猫 01/09/2021 1:00 AM

why are there 3 suns? and some weird lines on bg (make far stars, galaxies para X & Y 2, the "suns" 3 and "small stars" 5, better parallax)

I.K.U 01/09/2021 1:56 AM

this map looks like grim reaper stronghold

I.K.U 01/09/2021 1:57 AM

can u show some examples of "stolen parts" pls

I.K.U 01/09/2021 1:57 AM
@Silex
Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 11:23 AM

The 3 suns are meant to be stars on a night sky in space, I thought I'd look kinda cool, like being in another galaxy or something^^ I will change the Para for the stars and look how it looks, thanks for your feedback :)

コズミック猫 01/09/2021 11:24 AM

They are actually cool and well made. But maybe they are too too bright (full 255 alpha, it attracts ppls eyes to it) and also it will look cooler if u add different sizes of it. Like really really small further in the bg and some mid range and some close like this ones rn.

Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 11:34 AM

Which parts do you feel like are "stolen"? If you mean the hammerhit parts in between the "real" parts I'm sorry, that wasn't the plan, but it's actually hard to bring a lot of variation into those kind of parts, as they are only hammerhit parts. And true, it's a map inspired by the playstyle of stronghold, bit, bitd or back in the sky or even the new released map Arctic Frost, but that was my intention to be like that. I like these kinds of maps a lot, they are perfect to play as teams of 4 tees when you're experienced, but they are aswell a hell lot of fun to play in t0 when you're not that skilled. These maps perfectly show what the "mentality" of the teeworlds community is to me, that you don't have to know the people you play with, in maps like these everybody helps everybody when you are in t0 and everybody is friendly and it doesn't matter if you start the map over and over again. Maybe it's just my personal feeling about these kind of maps but I don't think we have 'too many' of those maps on ddnet, especially as there are a lot of new players due to the DDNet release on steam that will be on a skill level for playing around on stronghold, bit, bitd etc. or this map. I will of course change parts or things if needed, can you give me an example of which parts you meant in particular?

Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 11:35 AM

Good idea, thank you! I will try some different sizes an brightnesses later :)

コズミック猫 01/09/2021 11:36 AM

good, i will check parts later too

コズミック猫 01/09/2021 11:36 AM

for the galaxies hm add some fog behind the lines so it looks more realistic and some accumulated "dots as stars" ontop and around it that will look better. After that, bg top 👍

Cøke 01/09/2021 12:25 PM

read mapper rules before submit

Cøke 01/09/2021 12:25 PM

im tired of explaining the rules again and again

Cøke 01/09/2021 12:27 PM

simple hh map with some easy parts and cheatable parts xd + gores, too much gores

Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 1:57 PM

thanks for your feedback. I acatually read the mapper rules before mapping, again yesterday before submitting and now again after you message. Which rule do you consider broken in my map?

Cøke 01/09/2021 2:12 PM

hd things

Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 2:45 PM

I'm sorry this is my first map, could you be more precise on what you mean? I went through the rules again, but still dont know what you mean 😦

Cøke 01/09/2021 2:46 PM

All non-gameplay relevant decorations should be marked as 'detail' in the editor. Map credits are excluded.

Cøke 01/09/2021 2:47 PM

background things too

Marcell_HUN 01/09/2021 2:49 PM

Also the most important thing, if you want your map released, make original gameplay

Silex 01/09/2021 2:56 PM
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Silex 01/09/2021 2:56 PM

and this here is just a copy of the dummy drags i made in my maps imo

Silex 01/09/2021 2:57 PM

parts in this map are just stolen (don't have an other word for it) or it's just hh parts

Silex 01/09/2021 2:57 PM

i agree with you and i love t0 maps too but don't forget the creativity

Ama 01/09/2021 2:58 PM

dude you can clearly see he didnt steal he used 1x1 blocks and not 3x3 for the parts

Silex 01/09/2021 2:59 PM
Ama 01/09/2021 2:59 PM

XD

Marcell_HUN 01/09/2021 3:15 PM

Agree with Silex, t0 maps are fun if it has unique gameplay

Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 3:27 PM

Damn doesn't feel good to see this lol. I really didn't know my map is so similar to others in some parts, that was not my intention

Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 3:28 PM

I don't know if I'll be able to change these or if I just make a new map with whole different parts, so I think you can decline it

Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 3:29 PM

Sorry

@Silex

i really didn't know I mapped so similar to existing parts, that was not my intention

Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 3:30 PM

Except for the stronghold edge part, that part was actually inspired by stronghold because I thought it would fit into the map, in a changed way of course, but still

BlueMeww 01/09/2021 3:33 PM

rly nice design :oo

Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 3:34 PM

Thank you buddy :) I'll keep the design when I change the map/make a new one^^

Cøke 01/09/2021 4:50 PM

decline for now or waiting

@Bennji | Mats
Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 4:52 PM

do you think its possible to make changes that would make the map releasable or would it be too much? and what does waiting mean, is there a time limit or something?

Cøke 01/09/2021 4:53 PM

60 days on waiting

Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 4:54 PM

cause i would like to keep the general idea of the map, not sure tho if its worth the effort of changing parts if it's not going to be released in the end

Bennji | Mats 01/09/2021 4:54 PM

then put it on waiting and I'll see what i can do

コズミック猫 01/09/2021 5:08 PM

change gore or delete cause its way too long and ddnet idk if they accept gores might not, and also from the gores to the speedfly part. Those arent really hh, they look more random than actual parts you know. Try to do parts like the beginning ones

コズミック猫 01/09/2021 5:09 PM

"right side of image" for example like that one u made but more creative and different ways to get through

コズミック猫 01/09/2021 5:10 PM

all beginning parts till the gores are "ok", needs more variations no just hh and a wall of freeze. And try to avoid repetition. For example right at the beginning u made 2 times going up why, you could've done something much better

コズミック猫 01/09/2021 5:11 PM

also this, imo is not fun at all. Even if its a hh map. Having to pass though so many is boring

コズミック猫 01/09/2021 5:12 PM

maybe u can combine 2 or 3 with ways to go etc that u actually need them or smth

Cøke 01/09/2021 5:12 PM

$waiting

I.K.U 01/09/2021 6:40 PM

i dont think this part is a problem since its just a hammerhit to a block and catch alot of map have this

I.K.U 01/09/2021 6:40 PM

but i agree with the rest

I.K.U 01/09/2021 6:41 PM

same with this it looks the same but its not the same gameplay to get in

コズミック猫 01/09/2021 6:53 PM

this is litterally same but different block position

I.K.U 01/09/2021 6:59 PM

the gameplay?

Ama 01/09/2021 7:01 PM

just mirror your map XD

I.K.U 01/09/2021 7:40 PM

true

ᶰ°Konͧsti 02/22/2021 8:19 PM

sToLeN

ᶰ°Konͧsti 02/22/2021 8:19 PM

bruh

Cøke 03/07/2021 2:52 PM
@Bennji | Mats

Is there a fixed version coming here or should I decline the map? It's almost 60 days

Bennji | Mats 03/07/2021 3:29 PM

oh sorry you can decline the map

Cøke 03/07/2021 3:30 PM

$decline

Cøke 03/07/2021 3:30 PM

Hope u start a new one

Bennji | Mats 03/07/2021 3:31 PM

ty

@Cøke

🙂

wsike 03/07/2021 3:32 PM

gl on your next map :)

Bennji | Mats 03/07/2021 3:32 PM

ty

@wsike

and thanks for reminding me haha ❤️

コズミック猫 03/07/2021 3:33 PM

And remember if you need any help, you can ask on "mapping" 😄

Bennji | Mats 03/07/2021 3:35 PM

i will, ty

@コズミック猫

😄 ❤️