Newest Version Croneum tolde me, that the map name should be written in lower case

design fix:

$rate balance=7 flow=7 creativity=6 playability=7 fun=3 design=1 bonus=0

Still would have liked it more without jetpack and nade instead. Good map

$rate balance=8 flow=8 creativity=7 playability=8 fun=4 design=2 bonus=1

$rate balance=8 flow=7 creativity=8 playability=9 fun=4 design=2 bonus=0

easy release

agree with broke. the jetpack thing is weird af, you should go with the nade version, but make it a few less required shots maybe

the laser pull that prevents you from team-finishing should be hinted somehow

getting the dummy through this 1-tile hole is a small flow killer

have you tried placing the unfreeze directly under the freeze? I think that would let it feel smoother

I'm either too bad for this or it's a bit too pixel-perfect (more opinions please)

the design looks pretty good overall, but I think the bigger jungle midground bushes would look better

$rate balance=7 flow=7 creativity=5 playability=7 fun=4 design=2 bonus=0

so, like all the norx maps, this is really short. but it appears even shorter than the others..

what about making it a bit longer? you seem to have enough ideas, but it would be better if you make one decently long map instead of a lot short ones

do you need to embed the pistol marking btw? I think we already talked about that once 😄

file size can be cut down by probably 50% if you remove unused tiles from tilesets

entity bug

I find it weird that in the part with the 1-tile hole you fail if you go fast down

that's like really anti-speedrun

$rate flow=6

speaking about speedrun, you should add time-cps

this is way too short for me theres literally 6 parts o.O

also not fan of the "hold a/d at a very precise spot/corner and fall" that u used twice, its basically knowing the map and no skill required at all..

$rate balance=6 flow=5 creativity=5 playability=6 fun=2 design=2

$rate fun=1

the map is good but it would be unfair to give high flow/creativity ratings when there are so few parts (same for fun, it starts nicely and ends 1 minute later, thats kinda deceiving)

Tested with snail, the parts lack of explanations, the design is nice very simple and easy to play with, try to optimize your images your map isn't worth 700Kb could be down to 300/400.

$rate balance=6 flow=6 creativity=4 playability=5 fun=1 design=1 bonus=0

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hmn i thought short dummy maps are trending now. would make sense since there are so many short solos as well

I just thought it's shortness is because of the general norx series

i think the other ones are longer tho

Ye, it decreased every release, nora 2:14, noro 1:42, and this now 1:35

better make it a tiny bit longer again^^

i'll see what i can do. is one part more good?

$rate balance=7 flow=6 creativity=4 playability=7 fun=4 design=2 bonus=0

it's good. 3-4 more would be best imo

added one part+ a bit solo stuff at the end.

how is the ninja thing supposed to work? I can only get the dummy to ninja if I do some dummy copy shit

no one else got problems here? I always end up on the edge if I do it without dj oO

approved, length seems similar to noro now so it should be fine

you can drop dummy down on right side

I think freeze is a bit too opaque, makes it hard for me to focus on dummy, especially if he's in a stopper etc

btw last tee tower shouldn't be faily if u don't give any hint whatsoever

fixed and explained the screens + some other stuff tested with jao

added explaination for the new part

even more explaination xd

ready for release

Yes!

first of all, the bind that binds activating deepfly doesn't work

it's

`

second, you should replace

`, it improves readability

third, you can add new lines in the tune

zone

enter message with

` instead of forcing it with a lot spaces

fourth, the description is misleading: you don't activate deepfly by binding something, you bind something that can activate it then

and last, you used a lot double quote marks. that makes it a bit confusing to read + I think you even forgot some so it doesn't line up perfectly. instead, for the ones that surround the whole bind, use single quote marks (

)

also, [7:56 PM] jao: btw last tee tower shouldn't be faily if u don't give any hint whatsoever(edited)

can i just put the text from JustDeepfly there then?

doesn't matter how you fix it as long as you do it properly. I showed you my way, but if you prefer a different one, go ahead

i put the bind in the info corner with clipping and wrote in the tune zone enter message: "use deepfly function on this part" bcs you dont fly or anything there

add entities-off at the previous part and move spawn to the correct place then it's fine

and remove the unused font

done! thanks

ah, last thing: you should consider adding time-CPs

done

looks good to me