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the noob filter confused me so much

I quickly looked at some parts and this is what I find 1 NF is annoying, especially without unfreezing. 2 Map does not feel well structured, I think its because you are trying to build a square map. Tp between parts doesn't help either. 3 cus u have this structure easy to find skip, also i find one, both can go up.

That's all for today.

a little bit of indicators would be nice, i got confused while spectating thru map (unless you dont want to add indicators)

noob filter is bad + avoid noobfilter in map (it's ok to have one but not the best + not for this type of map) the first part or second filter (that how i see it because it's just a little part then 10 km fall) i guess red line is the real way, and it's badly made + cheatable on blue line

spawn is so far and too much spawn

cheat + you have the cp no need to change the telecp into a tele

forced aled are not great, and there is a lot in this map

boring edge section

too much spawn again + cheatable as triki mentioned, there is 1 fake kill tile down that doesn't exist in design can use tele 5 instead of having 3 cp for the same spawn for the 2 players the stopper to prevent taking rocket and the shield are useless because there is a shield 1 part later (if we don't count other potential cheat)

what is it for ? i used it for triple rocket but not sure it's the real utilization

too much spawn, no need cp, forced aled

cheatable

cp problems parts have issue (bad hook, freeze too close ...) for the end why tp 5 blocks away? can be connected + no need cp

forced aled

terrible drag, i didn't pass it's either touch freeze or die in kill tile

meh parts + repetiting with the noobfilter, early parts and incoming parts then space is a bit meh here with a close timing then the kill tile is too close for hooking up to go down for bounce.

the space totally change + kill tile structure change

forced aled + the parts i already talked about

no good setup here

cp problems, too much spawn, forced aled could add an indication for the wall because i went all the way around and though the map had no finish line

• bad idea to do a tele that goes into void for the end.

and even more with if you randomly spawn on the left and you friend on the right

global structure is interesting, for the design care that we can see better the difference between unhook and HT

also letting edge without tele is a bad idea

there is too much fly and jump edge, a bit repetiting, with many basic fillers and aled, a bit boring

parts are ok in generale, could be better on some aspect like some bad precise hook etc

imma decline for now, but i think the map have a potential if you are ready to do a big rework and reupload

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