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i like the map and the design but 2mb is too much?

the stoppers are useless, you can just fall and get back up.

and for speedrunning you can just laser the falling tee from above

you should add undeep on top of deep incase someone fails

tps should teleport you back on the platform (where im standing) also mark undeep in design

skip

probably takes more time to do than do the part normally

also in this part add unfreeze on the left side

should mark some of the unfreezes in design too

anyways good map, 8/10 id give it 3*

what happened to this one

2mb is indeed too much

downscale these images

rest of the images can be bundled together with unused removed

and you use a 2048x2048 image for just this thing which can be easily downscaled to a 64x64 quad

Hello everyone! some changes based on the feedback

Had some trouble trying to downscale the images, don't know how to do it

i think it should be marked in entities too

crazy bug

imo novice maps shouldn't have faily parts with no ways to save, F.E if your teammate falls there then you can't reach him with your hook, neither to go back to get him. maybe it's okay, tho i still decided to mention it in case if you want to make your map less faily

i would close this gap, as in t0 it could become very annoying if there are more players stacked there + it adds nothing to the part anyway. Also if you want to make it less faily you could add more hookthrough tiles on that part in case if accident happens and you can't reach

should be marked in entities too

i would remove one tile of hooktrought and add 2 more unhookable walls to make the jumping more comfortable, up to you

i would remove one line of freeze to make it less annoying for newbies

i have a mixed feeling about this part, while i do like it but i feel like it doesn't work too well with normal teles so it becomes easy to fail. As seen in ss if you leave your teammate close to edge and fail your hook you get tp'd up, and makes it really hard to save for a new player, or even impossible depending on where the player left his teammate which i don't think is fair for a novice map

cool map nonetheless

could make it not a falling part if too faily

also forgor about this one, i kinda fail to imagine how a new player could save there, i feel like it would become really annoying for newbies, might be just me but idk

Heyo! thanks for feedback! I add some different type of decoration, don't know if its fits well. Here it is

Should I remove some freezes there? for the jump

i still dislike the fact that trolls can block there by dropping random poor tees in that hole :(

i like the changes, the dummy part is less faily now as it's way easier.

Tho the issue that if you fall by accident and your partner is on unreachable spot then it's gg still there xd

maybe just do a checkpoint before initiating the dummy part so if tees fall he doesn't get tp'd to tele 10?

the issue is if you do like that then the drag might become harder for a newbie if you will drop your teammate in tp idk xd but i think it's a easy fix by extending the plat ig if it becomes a little harder somehow

use a program like paint.net or krita, and downscale by making the resolution smaller until the image starts getting blurry ingame

imo it looks good btw

Hey

you reffer to the left hole where is your dummy in that screenshot?

yep

oh

Hey! Made some changes on the suggestions. On deep part I made a platform there and i add a tp there

Fixed

1-3. Skips

4. This freeze ramps up the difficulty of this drag, it's possible to fall down in unfreeze but assuming there's no marking of unfreeze it only makes it confusing, you should remake this freeze/unfreeze
5. The logo is pixelated, yet it's 960x960px, you better make a new logo, considering its size you can make it about 500-600x200-300 or so, it's both less map file size and better quality logo. The animation of smoke/stars isn't looped and thus every time it ends it replays rapidly. You could make color to animation that will fade out stars at the end and make different stars dissapear at different but it's not easy to make if you are new to editor, for now it might be easier to make stars go back in the ground i guess
6. You might wanna add more spawn tiles
7. The bg in general feels kinda static because of para values you use, i tried tweaking them and para X/Y value for

group 4, for

group 1, for

group 2 looks quite nice, you might wanna try those and change it a little to your liking

wow

also fix this if not fixed

maybe add a tp or something else

Thanks

, how long it takes the map in ‘waiting’?

you can take your time, map gets automatically archieved if mapper is afk for 2 months so you have a lot of time to fix stuff

Hello there, made some changes

i think making the bottom tele would be better as it would force newbies to use laser and not just drop

Way too tight cp's

i'd move the undeep tile a bit further up as it may happen thay you drag your friend out and he's still deep

skip

Turn off entities, but if u have HD off u will see nothing, I think it's better to make "arrow_wood1" layer non HD, because it's all over the map like that.

Probably too tight time cp's here too

Strange structure here, maybe move tele to a little bit down, also making more space there is gonna be better, as long as map is t0

Cool map overall, remembered me you're map "Give u the Moon"

Thanks

, question. Too tight cps matters? Can I make it with more space ?

Yo, thats sick 🙂 well done!

^ for the time cp issue mentioned above remove one of them or remove one and add one in the middle

i'd keep for speedrunning

It's pretty useless to have 2 of them basically right next to eachother it's perfect if they are spaced out evenly

They are needed so that the speedrunners can check if they are ahead or behind their best run. If they checked it 4 seconds ago there is no need for them to check it again until some more parts are done

Undeep tiles is easily skippable by mistake(actually even I did it), imagine newbie to do it and then drag him up through stoppers, gg. I saw a bunch of times newbies dragging tee in deep somewhere and try to unfreeze them by hammering. I don't think it should be skippable. Should be an easy fix.

Also, what I noticed the previous time I played your map is this exact place on this part, very questionable beginning of part imo, really ez to press d a bit more and fall in freeze for the both. Just proposing an idea on the second screenshot - so like that u force 1 of the player make slightly more moves with a few variations of making it: u can hammer another tee to right, or u can hook him from the stoppers while he is falling.

This is totally up to u, but just saying what I noticed and proposing a solution. Good fixes tho, clean gameplay, clean design.

Hello! Fixed the problems

2 unused envelopes

I don't like it because the player on the right has to have time to hook the left one

how do you like this option?

I recommend moving it a little more to the right so that the top player doesn't have to stop

remove 1 tile so the player doesn't accidentally fall on the edge

raise the anfreeze, it will be better in terms of speed and if several people do the part

this option is faster

the map is nice, i like it very much! ^^

Yeah looks Nicer

Fixed, thanks!!

Update xD

too boring imo, just remove it entirely or change it

same here, change it to be a little hardedr

add a hookthru block here

at the top, so its easier to drag

make freeze 10% darker in design pls

rly boring, pls change

otherwise looks good to me

this was submitted way in the past so this rule https://discord.com/channels/252358080522747904/1325407774519332946/1343252335777812677 won't apply, but just know it will for future novices

can u put stopper layer over the tee?

Hi, where should i put the hooktrough??

to the right of the unhook

one is enough

Thanks

This doesn't seem to fit the novice category. There are too many sections involving mechanics that new players wont be familiar with.

tuff times when even murpi is giving testing feedback

I.e.:

I agree with murpi that this map is on the upper end of novice or maybe moderate, but i want to say that some novice maps are quite tough, so it's debateable. I also think that it's not just about mechanics but there are also reasons why this map is not suited for new players or even lower moderate players, i will explain more in my screenshots:

edit: imo El Quisco is a good example of how to do novice fillers in this style, they were less boring to me than the fillers of other maps https://ddnet.org/maps/El-32-Quisco/

I like the design, it's very cute!

I didn't search much for design stuff but i am quite sure this is not intentional

I guess it looks better if you add a few more stars at the right end of the map

i think easyright 3 has it a lot harder than this

Visual bug

agreed with welf/murpi, waiting for balancing (either make it novice, or buff parts and make it moderate ( i suggest makign it more moderate )

ok thanks!!

no mapper?

😭

awesome map, plz release