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did you use tentrom as an inspiration?

wtf looks nice

In terms of gameplay - probably not. The only thing i liked is the "spikes" for freeze, but tried to no to copy the style tho, used a different variation of it.

alright, i just got tentrom vibes instantly, both from the "spike" freezes and some parts

OH I REMEMBER THIS!

thanks, lol, editor said everything is alright when i did it :/

i mean, it was green

until this point i dont see any huge problems. ye, need some small fixes, but rn i focus on smth big)

i dont like this tps
especially last one, what a point to use tp? this is bad practic when u use tp like this.

hm so it looks like u change only first 20% of map and didnt touch a rest. for example this

first u used specials tiels which one easy replace to regular one , and also doesn't fit map styling.

better use deep instead of hammer.

Ok i think enough for me. i think this map close to waiting, but not enough. btw u really did good work with first 20%.

forced aled is meh

no flow + at the end if you press to much right the dummy die, and if you don't there is a chance for you dummy to die upper

this is a bit hard for brutal and the space is badly made in many spot

the flow is broken because you don't pass is in 1 hook

the entrance in the part is too hard the start of the part with the edge is boring and not great the jump in the part can touch easily the freeze

and 2 times the same things at the end

why using teleport for a part 10 tiles away, you can connect it

stopper not needed

aled

the space here is not good, the solo is not great + it's something already mentioned in the past declined

still cheatable + the entities here are horrible the end of the parts with the grenade is a bit weird and confusing the the rest of enttities

on the right can smooch the entities then the shield can be hide and the speeders are just useless

part not fix since the declined stopper sucks here, the space is bad with the platform, the dummy swing and goes in the tele the hook after that is bad too

cool drag but easy to cheat

unbalanced, right is hard , left is easy

the end is still bad/ not fixed and a weird cp

the set up is bad and the space is bad too

V

2 bad hook

too much speed down on this swing is not smooth and make is bad to play

why random stopper

really weird and i didn't use those HT

no space for the throw, and wtf the end of the part you are on a hook it's not rly stable for this hook

k nvm the end of the part is not what i thought

timecp 10 badly place, lake of space and the unhook tile is not needed + useless because u can still hook

some stopper are for anti cheat but not even sure you can cheat that

the unsolo is useless

timing press is back, i died on this press left when i saw the arrow

broken, shiel kill the run, + next part kill the run

space bad, the block and freeze blocking the throw

many way to not use the speeder here

the structure idea like the map control is cool but can't see the diff in design

still need some work on the structure, specially on kill tile structure it doesn't flw a good logic, it's a bit random

parts are creative but few problems, sometime a bit unbalanced, or some flow problems added to problems mentioned

some of the things already mentioned on the first decline are not fixed + need a biggest rework, so decline

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test more the map, having impossible parts is not normal. try to make it cleaner in entities, many are useless, or can be replace, and some can be with a better placement or inside another entities (like shield in unhook (care for cheats) or cp in undeep or timecp ...)

also the tele should mark where you respawn (in general spawn don't need mark but here the spawn is used in the part)

i scrolled for so long

Oh i know its map

Its insane :0