Mentions:

maybe just use cps instead of this double tp setup

this set up is very clunky, its so easy to feel into either tp or arrow

annoying

I assume some levels require deepfly but the map doesn't enable it currently. You have to put

in server settings.

btw u can skip the part a bit and keep the endless

i would like to give u demos for it but somehow my demos are recorded in all black idk

why so tight why so tight why so tight why so tight why so tight

Why u mappers keep making shit so fuckin annoying and tight

• fixed a lot of things noted by dekael and pio
• in the start i added the head bumper so u gotta do it the intended way so u dont bump ur head into the kill tiles and die rekt
• all of em have text where i explained what i did

also did sv_deepfly 1

also i fixed the color in the background being a separate picture, i mean it wont make much impact on the size of the map cause they were 16x16 pixels, but it just looks cleaner now

i dont think u can get to the easter egg without the stopper someone should test if u can ngl

hold my cup of water

yes, stopper is needed

indeed

(ignore this)

I see the intended way now, but my first thought is just hook the dummy and hold d since none is deep

• made the start unskippable
• added the stoppers at the checkpoint 6 part
• some minor bug fixes
• the checkpoint 8 part uses cptps

• fixd

dont start a moderate map with a dummy start

add more space in spawn room

this is just a bad idea

i guess its teamforce, so its probably ok, but still

btw u shouldnt map ur parts in a boxed in format like this, unless it adheres to the design and theme of your map (i guess it could work with this 'frame' design). Because otherwise it looks like you just set the game border to 200x600 and tried to map to fill in all the space

rather you just start with parts first and chain them until the map naturally feels complete

you should add more space in these drag parts. (unless it's necessary for your part or map, but here it's not)

if dummy falls in cfrm before hits cp25, they go back to spawn

u also should provide a way for top guy to get to < if they fall into tele 1 (after bottom guy lives)

i think the map is slightly too tight and parts need more space thruout the entire map as of now

also, you shouldn't use so many special tiles in your parts

i'd try to re-make your parts with more space, less special tiles (such as endless hook powerups, hook blockers, excessive stoppers, nohit/hit powerups, and jump refills)

and try to create a 'theme' or natural flow of parts and moves for your map. I think the best way to understand this is to look at recently released maps and study how they space out their parts, how they space the tiles that make up the parts, and how they give / take away powerups in a way that isn't cluttered

take a look at Not Novice, Cyber Space (cyber space uses special tunes in a nice, non cluttered way IMO), Holidays, and Spoon for examples of some good maps

Mention:

i will decline the map for these reasons -- but you could definitely reuse some ideas of the parts here in either a refurbished version of this map or another new map. I wouldn't try to edit the parts in the current structure though, there's surely not enough space within the map rn.

thanks for the advice, this was my first map, and ill try to make a better map next time with your advice❤️

A good first map, I'd say.