#wena
18/49 | Balance: 4/10 • Flow: 5/10 • Creativity: 2/10 • Playability: 6/10 • Fun: 1/5 • Design: 0/3 • Bonus: 0/1 — 1 Vote
DDNet 07/19/2018 11:40 PM
@Seba0006
DDNet 07/19/2018 11:40 PM
Seba0006 07/19/2018 11:50 PM

Fixed some bugs

Brokecdx- 07/20/2018 5:26 PM
@Seba0006

Teles are not marked, + play your map yourself before posting it

Brokecdx- 07/20/2018 5:46 PM

If you want i can rate it, or i rate it when it got reworked

Seba0006 07/20/2018 6:00 PM

Thanks, i accidentally deleted it , i played my map before post it , the first versions have the teles marked but the second one not, i think that maybe i sent the wrong version , this is the correct one , i think is brutal ⭐ ⭐

jao 07/22/2018 12:19 PM
@Syltoox

why delete

jao 07/22/2018 12:22 PM
@Seba0006

please choose a map-name that's not so lewd

Syltoox 07/22/2018 12:26 PM

pichula mean penis

Syltoox 07/22/2018 1:28 PM
vozdushniy 07/22/2018 1:47 PM

hAHAHAa

plsplsplslol 07/22/2018 4:53 PM
Seba0006 07/22/2018 5:55 PM

xD ok i changed the name to " Wena "

plsplsplslol 07/22/2018 5:56 PM

wena

jao 07/22/2018 5:57 PM

wena or Wena

Seba0006 07/22/2018 5:57 PM

Wena

Seba0006 07/22/2018 5:57 PM

but i thought that the map cant be in mayus

Seba0006 07/22/2018 5:57 PM

i mean , the name of the file

jao 07/22/2018 5:58 PM

the map name has to be the file name

jao 07/22/2018 5:58 PM

please adjust it

Seba0006 07/22/2018 5:58 PM

Changed the logo

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Rische 07/22/2018 6:35 PM

$rate Bonus=2

Brokecdx- 07/22/2018 6:39 PM

$rate balance=4 flow=5 creativity=2 playability=6 fun=1 design=0 bonus=0

Seba0006 07/22/2018 6:48 PM

Why design 0?

Brokecdx- 07/22/2018 6:49 PM

Markings arent too good will send link in a sec

Brokecdx- 07/22/2018 6:59 PM

https://imgur.com/a/9fPYqaU

Map appears to me unbalanced because you got Novice / Moderate / Brutal parts. Still would say it heavily favours moderate 2-4 ⭐ .

Flow is okay didnt find anything too bad.

Heavily lacks on creativity gores tunnels, solo parts, or certain drag parts aren't too exciting.

Playability is good.

Brokecdx- 07/22/2018 7:12 PM

Cp 1 shields are unnecessary

jao 07/22/2018 7:13 PM

sun is so stolen xd

jao 07/22/2018 7:13 PM

from themix or someone

jao 07/22/2018 7:14 PM

you need to add an

where you add info in the design (like on the screen)

jao 07/22/2018 7:18 PM

mod 2-4 is far off imo. there is stuff like kinta, faily solos, hard edges, tight rocketfly, etc

Brokecdx- 07/22/2018 7:19 PM

yeah just like in baby aim series

jao 07/22/2018 7:19 PM

but I have to say, I can't find a single bit creativity

jao 07/22/2018 7:20 PM

baby aim is easier

jao 07/22/2018 7:22 PM

shouldn't these be upside down? xd !!!!!!

jao 07/22/2018 7:23 PM

` looks like info marking, not warning

Seba0006 07/22/2018 7:25 PM

Maybe i should rework to make it moderate

jao 07/22/2018 7:25 PM

and to make it more creative

Seba0006 07/22/2018 7:25 PM

Ye

Seba0006 07/22/2018 7:26 PM

I will wait more suggestions and i will rework it

jao 07/22/2018 7:27 PM

make filter shorter

jao 07/22/2018 7:27 PM

especially on moderate you don't need to waste people's time there

jao 07/22/2018 7:28 PM

don't just make the map a horizontal line, some directional changes after some parts

jao 07/22/2018 7:28 PM

to keep it interesting

jao 07/22/2018 7:29 PM

did you use automapper on freeze?

jao 07/22/2018 7:31 PM

don't put grass in these unhook rectangles if you have to hook through them

jao 07/22/2018 7:31 PM

grass is usually solid so it feels unnatural to hook through it

jao 07/22/2018 7:32 PM

put something interesting as "winner room" (after finish line)

jao 07/22/2018 7:32 PM

pretty weird if you just run through a wall at the end

jao 07/22/2018 7:32 PM

and most importantly, put more effort into the map

jao 07/22/2018 7:33 PM

looks really rushed

jao 07/22/2018 7:33 PM

(e.g. you didn't care for details at all)

jao 07/22/2018 7:35 PM

"declined" it, these suggestions should be fine for now

jao 07/22/2018 7:35 PM

no reason to waste more time here if you rework it anyways

jao 07/22/2018 7:36 PM

(specific suggestions won't help)