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Looks very empty map
don't think these parts are good nowadays - they r just long and boring
first part deep is very unbalance compare with other part
even if you set it as sv_deepfly 1 also very unbalance imo
yeah
maybe just add some hookable tiles
this part is not well calculated on the landing point, try to let second sg be far so the movement become more smooth
this map has huge problem on part balance, for me it just feel like its a old era novice map but somehow got some moderate/brutal skill needed part inside
this will cause real nub player cant pass this map and suffer hard (or feeling gay), then for pro this is too boring for them (most of it too easy) so they rarely enjoy it
and also the map that you refer on try to target on 2017> or more latest
btw this make more sense on telegun, not jetpack off
hmm okay
will fix up best i can
deepfly is now disallow as defult setting
if you want player able to deepfly you can add sv_deepfly 1 in server setting
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oh
deepfly is rocket with deep froze dummy right
nope
hammer
or are you talking about deepfly.cfg
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your map have many deep part inside so i just mention about this to let you know you can able it or just let it disable
this map has a really unbalanced gameplay and uncreative parts
its also relatively short
and has bad design which hurts me the most
it doesnt need fixing but rather reworking the whole thing
ok
its my first map so ig thats a problem
ill try to rework it
should i change color palletes/theme or anything?
i'm not sure what is the biggest problem
bruh my english
try to focus on making some more creative parts first
ok
will do
should i scratch the first part with the deepfreeze fall or no
like replace it all with something else
idk, if u can think of some nice way to improve it then dont delete it
aight
map doesn't have a teamforce tho so it could be problematic
imagine 10 players jumping in at once
yeah
true
cant people just join a team though?
i feel like if players are doing a moderate map they would use they're own team
also whats deepfly
the black is tele and i made this part as bit shorter less ugly.. good?
change this part completely
should i make the map longer or no
idk if long ddrace maps or short ones are better
not about how long
advice?
its over basic for moderate
uh
so
also for novice in 2021
try to change it with creative part
added cps and tele
i balanced this whole part and made it harder
yeah thats what i did here https://discord.com/channels/252358080522747904/915602487300464650/915694352972541993
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bruv no offense but i cant understand your english
doesnt mean to be offensive
i dont understand lol
sorry
uhm
those part that you do is highly similar to most of the old map
the creative that i mention is
do something different
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who has experience with map making and can speak english good?
:p
short = better
so is this map goodig lol
yeah my map is glorious
you can get inspiration from other maps, but please don't start copying parts
I know it's not a big deal, but I'm telling you because I noticed it right away.
startline skips not allowed, try to avoid it
solo parts, jetpack or anywhere else you get or lose something are not properly marked
never use the red one, only when its not touchable at all.. use the green one if u want 45° freezes
you don't have to spam shields, it's enough every 2 tiles. because shields have a larger hitbox than other tiles (1.5 tiles each side)
you have mixed faily t0 parts and very simple easy parts, please look at new maps to get an idea of how a map should look like. also you should read the mapper rules again piece by piece. since this map is not really fixable i will reject it. nevertheless you should first try to apply the said things in this map, you can then send it to me privately
$decline
Okay, thanks for all the tips and critique, i'll try to rework the map or possibly toss it and make a new one