#Good_morning
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DDNet 04/09/2022 9:47 PM
@masti

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Mefju 04/09/2022 10:14 PM

laser part so hard

Welshi 04/09/2022 11:17 PM

Confused on how to part

Welshi 04/09/2022 11:17 PM

Rest of map I get + is cool I like it

Welshi 04/09/2022 11:18 PM

But I’m assuming there’s like a way in which u’re not just jumping up cause that’s uh- 0-0

masti 04/09/2022 11:24 PM

thanks, i'll fix that part, i'll improve it

masti 04/09/2022 11:30 PM

now you can pass with grenade

masti 04/09/2022 11:32 PM

-fixed a freeze bug, and corners

masti 04/09/2022 11:35 PM

-now more easy

masti 04/09/2022 11:39 PM

-fixed corner -fixed hard part

FJP 04/09/2022 11:42 PM

honestly i would keep this part as it was, its fairly consistent

FJP 04/09/2022 11:43 PM

i do think that the tele laser changes were needed, as that part was way ahrder than the rest of the map

FJP 04/09/2022 11:43 PM

i might consider expanding it, as the map is already on the short side, and the laser semmingly comes out of nowhere

masti 04/09/2022 11:43 PM

ok

masti 04/09/2022 11:44 PM

I extend the map

@FJP
Welshi 04/09/2022 11:44 PM

corner

Welshi 04/09/2022 11:45 PM

corner part 2

masti 04/09/2022 11:51 PM

fixed

masti 04/09/2022 11:56 PM

fixed parts

masti 04/10/2022 12:00 AM

-fixed lasertele part

masti 04/10/2022 12:01 AM
masti 04/10/2022 12:08 AM

a good sun

FJP 04/10/2022 12:26 AM
masti 04/10/2022 12:28 AM

fixed

masti 04/10/2022 12:29 AM

fixed laser part

masti 04/10/2022 3:38 PM

-added clouds

masti 04/10/2022 3:40 PM

oops

masti 04/10/2022 3:41 PM

now yes

masti 04/10/2022 3:52 PM

-added more midground

masti 04/10/2022 4:07 PM

-bug midground fixed

masti 04/10/2022 4:11 PM

-bugs fixed

masti 04/10/2022 4:14 PM

-more bugs fixed

FJP 04/10/2022 4:23 PM

you got 3 unused images

FJP 04/10/2022 4:23 PM

city background, stars, and grass main

FJP 04/10/2022 4:29 PM

unhookables are random, but all hookables are the same

FJP 04/10/2022 4:30 PM

instead of spamming unfreeze symbols, just take the symbols out and I think it will look cleaner

FJP 04/10/2022 4:32 PM

In general I think the design could use some reworking. The freeze and teleport look very similar, so I would make it easier to tell them apart. The background is far too big imo.

FJP 04/10/2022 4:32 PM

Maybe make the unhookable and hook different shades of the same color? Thats up to you though

FJP 04/10/2022 4:32 PM

Also the bright green against everything seems like a weird color choice

FJP 04/10/2022 4:33 PM

I guess theres jsut too many colors that it doesnt feel cohesive

masti 04/10/2022 4:45 PM

ok

masti 04/10/2022 4:57 PM
@FJP

now is good?

masti 04/10/2022 5:38 PM

-thanks

@FJP

for the help and ideas

FJP 04/10/2022 5:39 PM

i like it alot more now 🙂

masti 04/10/2022 5:39 PM

🙂

FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:27 PM

Okay, already test your map. I feel it boring and lazy. Too short maybe

FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:29 PM

Give it more space to the spawn and put the freezes behind the start line 2 or 3 tiles far so people can reach the ground in a easily way, for the timing of the rocket

FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:32 PM
FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:32 PM

red: give it a bit of space there

FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:34 PM

green: That jump with the rocket doesn't have a nice flow to go up, maybe delete 1 block and make it a bit bigger

FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:34 PM

yellow: put some unfreezes so people don't have to wait too much

FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:36 PM

Nice part, but too tight

FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:40 PM
FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:40 PM

red: make more interesting movements in all this zone cuz I feel the parts too lazy and a bit boring

FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:41 PM

yellow: give more space so people can easily go up, that 1 tile space gives a bad flow or something

masti 04/10/2022 6:43 PM

I do not put unfreeze because it would go by very quickly

FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:44 PM

this laser part seems cool but if you have do it something more interesting, the idea of the part is really nice, but the gores part that you make it's bad. It seems like some hard gores map compared to all other parts. It breaks the flow. You can try deleting all this part and create something with hookables maybe, some swings would be nice and make it more bigger

FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:46 PM

and this last 2 parts, well, I don't have nothing to say here. Make this parts more interesting, more tryhard movements but easily to complete thinking about the level of stars of the map.

FeaRZ 04/10/2022 6:47 PM

That's my opinions about the map, good luck!

masti 04/10/2022 6:48 PM

😄

masti 04/10/2022 7:09 PM
masti 04/10/2022 7:10 PM

ready

masti 04/10/2022 7:32 PM

-fixed "no tele"

Ravie 04/11/2022 3:34 PM

This map is not releasable for a few reasons. Gameplay is not that interesting except the tele laser part, which is cool but way too hard compared to the rest of the map. Also the whole map is very tightly mapped which makes for an awkward experience with bad flow. Design is pretty decent so good job on that. All in all if this is your first map, it's a good effort, just not enough to release.

Ravie 04/11/2022 3:34 PM

$decline

masti 04/11/2022 10:18 PM

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