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cool map with interesting parts but very unpolished. some parts are way harder than others, one player constantly has to wait until other finishes the solo part (i guess its the same with drag parts but idk), and some parts are just unpleasant to do. probably decline but i liked it.

design bug

you can sometimes fly into the stoppers and fail either make them full blocks or make the switch 2 blocks

way too hard and long

unnecessary

no reason for it to be blue but it doesnt matter

also unnecessary, just put tp lower

overall awkward part but why is there a single tune that makes jump 6% stronger

the mountains have way too low parallax, which makes them look farther than the stars while still being in front of them and also disappear into the ground a lot

dragger often activates too early, better make it based on height

looks like your trying to not activate it early intentionally tbh

lemme try it with ur fix

i didnt test the fix

doesnt work

it works for me

if u move it lower the grabber doesnt give enough speed, when u move it higher the dragger makes it even more inconsistent

truly inspiring names

how much tiles are there in between the dragger and the laser blocker

3?

3

i think it might be a problem with draggers only checking whether to drag every 7th tick

btw logo looks very similiar to snowy structure's

where did the messages go

https://tenor.com/view/tomato-throwing-tomatoes-throw-tomato-sad-emoji-tomato-emoji-gif-17485170219137074421

1:. nerfed the part, fixed entities not lining up with tiles 5:. unhookable instead of stoppers 6:. removed the tune and a lil nerf 7:. fully enclosing the grabber would make the part way too inconsistent :(

misc: made the mountains have bigger paralax than stars

There aren't enough time checkpoints for the second route all over the map

I don't like this mixture of ctp and regular tp, it's better to use only ctp

first part is too narrow. I think it would be better to move the lower TP down so that it looks cleaner and better

It's also quite strange to me that you need to control the hook, otherwise the dummy will just fly into the TP

I don't think this stopper is needed, it's better to just make a wall on the right if it's only needed to get into the hole

I don't really like these auto solo parts, mainly because you can't get through them without practice (mainly regarding the second one)

I don't think it's a good setup to hook him from above, then move him lower, and only then move to the right. It would be better to move him to the right right away, then the flow of the part would be better

This hook is inconvenient because there is only 1 ht block, it is better to add 1-2 more

I don't see much of a reason for these hook blockers

I also don't see a reason for this door, it's better to remove it

It's too far to pull here, it's better to move 3tp 2-3 blocks to the left

I don't see any reason for this stopper with tp

The second part is the only part without a hammer jump, which is not consistent with the main idea of ​​the map

This hammer jump is pretty random and annoying, I wish it was easier

A boring and unpleasant moment at the end of a part, it's better to make it easier or do something more interesting (preferably also easier)

These parts are quite random and much easier than the solo parts that come after them

There's a rather unpleasant way to pass part here, it would be better to add a wall or something similar

It's very tight here, and there's not enough ht imo

It's a pretty boring moment, I'd like something more interesting

This part is too easy, and just like the second part, there is no hammer jump

unnecessarily difficult solo part

You can skip the part here

to go back quickly in case you fail

I think this should be in here for ppl toggle right button without try skip part

I don't like that you can't go right straight away here, you have to go left and do a hammer jump

I don't see the reason for these stoppers (well, they seem to setup the hit downwards, but it seems like it should work without them)

This is a pretty weird ctp, it's better to push it to the tp

you need to hook the block

doesn't work

Okay, it works, but you have to move away specifically to accelerate, which breaks the flow of the part. It's still better to make the flight to the right easier

too tight

quite a boring moment in my opinion

Another part without hummer jump

It's a pretty nasty moment, if you don't know where to hit, you won't do it

a very unpleasant moment and very strange

The only part where refill jumps are used on the map

I don't think this structure with buttons is necessary, you can lower the top part of the part and that's it

It's not very intuitive to move it to the left, I don't see a problem if the tp is on the right

Overall, I think the map has potential, the ideas are very interesting, but it needs to be worked on in terms of quality. I also didn't like any of the solo parts between the parts. I think it's better to remove them and make a completely drag map. I also think the map is too hard for a moderate, I think it's more worthy of brutal

1. fixed tmcps
2. fixed, replaced all teles on parts, with ctps
3. moved 1 down
4. u release the hook then drop down and catch him, and he swings beatifully,the part flows great imo
5. fixed
6. added turn off entities and failproofed the second afk solo part
7. fully remade the second part
8. fully remade the second part
9. fullyre
10. full
11. moved the hookthrough 2 blocks lower
12. to get back faster
13. remade it to include a hammerjump
15. part filler the part would be a singular action if u remove it
16. devs fix grabbers plz, also the randomness in them is not that infuriating
17. the parts aint even that hard
18. added a lil more hookthrough
19. made it more interesting
20. remade the ending of that part
21. remade the solo part
22. fixed the skip
23. its not that precise, just hold a lil bit more after getting off the platform
24. removed the stoppers and fixed the skip by removing them
25. removed it due to changing all of the tps
26. made it 1 larger
27. now its a pretty "boring moment" after a pretty interesting moment imo
28. made that part contain hammerjumping
29. added an indicator for where to hammer
30. idk
31. removed the jump refills
32. removed the draggers and lowered the top part down
33. added indicators for where to fling the dummy

from top to bottom 1 to 33

there might be tele bugs because i rushed the tele changes in like 5 hours

also design bugs (probably)

speaking of the difficulty i dont think its worth being a brutal, more of a moderate 3-4

its not long

"the map is hard for a moderate, but shortfor brutal" thats my thinking

sorry that it took 2 whole days for the map update, i was installing linux

linux mentioned!!! ||i use arch btw||

red: currently, transition is awkward. so, delete the unfreeze and make sure that the player land on the next part even if the player doesnt need to press any key after press jump key blue: wrong tele

this part barely works at the first try, fix it to give more flow/qol for speedrunners

this part doesnt work well

red: can hook here blue: can skip ht

this part is uncomfortable to do and works irregularly. especially, dragger usage feels bad because it slams into the tele at the very first

complicated part with many switches, you can rework this part with less switch(maybe you can delete switch number 7)

also, moving here to here(blue way) is uncomfortable

overall you need to refine this part

the flow of this part is extremely broken

suggestion to make the part without using this speeder/switch

here too, make the part without using speeder

the number of the part is odd, need to make even

A hard filler, but the idea is good

I think it's better to remove the hard kog fillers and make other fillers similar to the previous ones

similar to the auto ones or the grabber ones

i think better grabber

grabber is really awful to make parts with, both testers said that the parts are just awfully random

It would be cool if you made all the fillers like this

and im not skilled enough to make something thats not random with grabbers

If you can't build them, then do something easier for you

Take a look at the recently released maps

all your parts are unbalanced

I would also like to point out that you have too few parts on your map. I think you should add more parts.

There are only 9 parts on the map

These parts are very boring to me

you also use special tiles where they are not needed

like the walljump tiles?

oh yeah i didnt know how to transition there when i was building the layout

i ask for map decline

I also want to mention that some parts are uncomfortable

Mention:

I hope you do much better next time

xD

cool map , cool ideas