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388kb

is that supposed to be a compliment

dunno what's so hard about optimisation

yes

cp seems not needed

better move this one

these sgs arent visible in normal zoom, seems worth mentioning

this part doesnt use jetpack at all, but the next one does

dont understand why livefreeze, with regular freeze its the same part

how about this

i was actually playing with dyncam back when i was designing the shotgun part. is it worth fixing?

both were intended with jetpack but one of my friends discovered that the first one's possible without it, so i kinda decided to make both possible without jetpack. thought it'd still be okay since jetpack is used in solo part

livefreeze so top tee can get out of that tunnel manually without requiring rescue

DYNCAM IN DDRACE?

i dont trust it but with more freeze maybe

depends who u ask really, some people like ravie hated parts that ddont work with default zoom but im sure moderate players can find the keybind for zoom, imo wouldn't change

if your choices are livefreeze vs draggers , i think draggers would be better, the guy i was playing with said in 2y of ddnet he never saw this tile before xd

one of my friends recommended replacing that fall with a mini drag here, i think i'm doing the drag instead

such a short fall looks hard to make unskippable

epic soundtrack

fixed most of the issues found by yaccre

https://tenor.com/view/where-you-at-gif-21177622

what did you excpect lol

testing is just like that

No need for 2 to teles here, i'd remove the left one

add unfreeze

Don't need to surround the tele with jetpack since it's in a solo part

unbalanced parts

Don't need multiple teles since it's just 1 player in each part

idk

You can put it in freeze to prevent skip, and unfreeze it on the side.

u don't need all these unsolos

You can just do this

or this if you want to keep the solo

skip

??? undeep again

novice part

Mark the lamps as

yay or nay fix?

intended, actually... or this is also unbalanced this way?

idk Its skip

i mean it was meant to be one. choose short but hard, or easy but long

1 tile no its hard

with telees

what did you even mean by this...

skip last hook (just hold A when u hook in top corner) and i dont like that you make them walk all the way back. whole map has the issue of being unfun to play because you cant move around. i understand the name of the map "claustrophobia" but there's a reason this style of map doesn't already exist (outside of old maps, solos)

this is kinda lazy/pointless

both parts either not fun or annoying

not sure if wall hammer is intended there in the middle

• unbalanced cus all the other guy does is hook twice

map wanted to be "hard" novice parts then decided "nah aled"

basically, pissing off any moderate-level player that wanted a moderate map and now has to stop playing to go figure out how to do an aled

triple tele

xD

this is not a "part" this is a "realize you have to get them edge under a wall" and really stupid imo

if u meant to use sg there well, its slower and harder

hard gameplay to be moderate thesecond jetoack

and boring solo

place to sg above but dont even need it if the bottom tee does

basically first part i liked so far xd

might be better as tele honestly, edge and dj below hooking left

idk if there should be hh potential in mod anyway

is 10 times more hard with tele XD

5 blocks to fly

meh

i think if he add a hookable

it fits after it. just make it part of the next solo

add tele and a hookable here

i think

sorta design related but i dont like that these sections of just air kinda break the feel of the map being claustrophobic

similarly troll to the aled, kinda special jp usage

stop trolling read chat :´v

good part

no u

u

but in end of drag

can add unfreeze

my comment was more specific, the other jp stuff is fine

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feels not enough space here

triple tele again and double tele on solo part

like solo one only player pass for down

cp25 is not a part.

I like the flow of this gores, fits the theme well

useless undeep

design error

maybe unpopular opinion but i really like these parts

dont have metod to obtain rocket again

unclear you can hook out btw i thought i was stuck for a while until he came all the way around to save me xD

also if you end up here you do need him to come save you...

and really annoying to b since you force this 1x1 and 2 tall section

might work better with a dragger that pulls you up if you fail.

can i just take cp 47 and back to tele and have hook

why are your screenshots like fine antiques

you use same cp here which makes it really annoying to retry the part + bumps into freeze

and its even worse since you only put 1

if u do a bouncying laser an d hold d or a depending of part can pass to down part and skip unendless

is one try skip

lasering them at the end here is kinda annoying

ever since i picked up the laser its felt really boring and way easier than like all of the map before it

which is really bad, usually maps shouldnt randomly get easier unless its like the end or something

again random undeep

i can die here

annoying to put them down here, maybe -1 tile

ht 3 left, otherwise awkward to hook

especially with weak

can end take weapon and powers and do the last drag with all

map has a ton of problems, i think the idea is somewhat bad but some of the parts did feel fun at times. definitely unbalanced and questionable design choices where it's not clear what to do for a moderate player

sorta cramped to pull them out (solo is right there)

how about making it the intended way

yeah i guess that's fine

before this filler wasn't even there at all, the top tee just had to wait for the bottom tee to do their filler. then i added it so both tees have something to do.

is it redundant or something considering that the top tee already has a moderately long drag to do while the bottom tee has just the hammer to do?

tbh i cant remember what they had to do there before i can check later

tbh i mentioned whole map is sorta unbalanced, i guess instead of this just make the other tee do less

unless u think u can squeeze in more mapping where the other tee does more

i think i was actively bored at the laser parts tho u could make those harder

i think there is enough space for me to make an actual full length drag for the bottom tee if i remove that aled. maybe i'll do that instead

how did you even shotgun with the bottom tee? every time i tried it just hits that vertical structure to the right. the intended way was with the top tee shotgunning anyway

i mean those are winner rooms i wanted to make them spacious

maybe dont put a spot for them to sg then xd

In my opinion

one of principal problems

Is the unbalanced difficult in some parts

Are so big

looks like everything i have currently changed rn, any other stuff to fix before i update it?

ik that it has to do with the map but this in t0 looks horrible pls make more space

the map is 2p teamlocked

all of the adjustments from above message + slight changes to second deep part (in screenshot provided) + random minor fixes mostly from earlier reports

this air pocket is unnecssary for part, is it intendfed? or just antifail

this shotgun is not easy to do on default zoom

its harder if u afk as top here

since holding > makes it harder for bottom guy

change this to something more engaging

the sg can be skiper

skiped

i think u can put mote things in detail

u dont fix the entities error

intentional

putting just unhook there just doesn't really work to me honestly i wanted more continuity in that plumbing without adding rigid borders

you are misinterpreting it, the design should still be consistent with the tiles used

what did you even mean by this? it is consistent no??

like the tiles used

arent the ones seen in design

like that looks like a ht to me

but its tp in design

well i dont even know where it is

in what world would a plain colour be interpreted as hookthrough if hook and unhook both have actual textures in design

or does the textured background make such an illusion or something

i'm not quite getting whatever point you're trying to prove here

can i just replace it with some random filler drag so it's less annoying and time consuming

i actually liked this part :c

same

it fits the theme, it's small, doesnt really matter to me as much as other stuff

same

Yes

i am actually shocked that more people agree with me

stuff

stuff.

I'd prefer this, or at least add a harder more skillful way to get the tee over quickly. rn it's kinda booooring imo

the beginning of the part is just kinda not good

imagine if you 3x the part length. then it's reaaally boring. Just because a part is short doesn't make it ok to have lower standards IMO. It just feels a lot less inspired than the rest of your parts

if you add one hook it wont change the original idea too much

this should be good enough

would bve cool if first bit was unhook

there

Sorry I can't test I have claustrophobia

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be thankful that i didn't make arachnophobia

Too much of start points

Same moves part by part here

A little bit punishable move here IMO, cuz part is long and setup here is not great for that exact hook-through-tp move

Unfreeze here and in a lot of places all over the map

unbalanced parts part after part pretty much

This is just an outdated moves here, not fun at all with this amount of space

I found this end of part at cp9 is very meh and im against this in every map, but atleast u slowed down the flow before this move. Also the swing-move after that is also very inconvinient, u should hook the wall but you are not enough close and still ain't moved through the tps so feels meh also

Also you can skip the hook boost and just hook the wall

meh move, better give player enough speed just get the bottom tee straight into another part IMO, but ok

Forced hh is a bit much for moderates IMO

all kogs are hard to do for moderate players with this amount of space

random hole

also might be a hard move with this spacing but ok ig cuz setup is ~comfy

The bottom one can skip the solo but the upper one should go linear through the solo

the bad spacing makes this part uncomfortable(not only this tho)

uncomfortable to do, roof is just really close to the player and move itself is just outdated as hell IMO

kinda found it hard for moderate

Idea is cool here, but maybe just not for this map, spacing makes it worser sadly(I liked the idea, really)

found this move is kinda random(yeah we found u can setup it, but will moderate players found it as fast as we did?)

just too tight, u can't rehook the bottom tee cuz not enough time - he just goes straight to tps

If u jump after unfreeze - u go to freeze again, if u hold hook + right - easily go to tps, so u have to time it pretty much very well

same moves

also not uncomfortable to make through this part

bad angle to do the part + no unfreeze after u did it + move is boring and time wasting IMO

part is very tight, no other comments - it's just uncomfortable

roof is too close to tee, u need to jump - but u can't really jump

you fall - you die

Just time wasting imo, outdated move

50% of it is just a setup other 50% is tight kog

move is hard without any reason for it imo

cool but setup is not great, also unfreeze after the part would be great

2nd part is easier imo than the 1st

very unbalanced place here, the bottom one making the 3 parts basically. 1 before deep, 1 after undeep and backing the undeeped tee

setup is not great + u can easily die here in freeze at edge

Easy die here after being teleported especially if your teammate have already made it through the solo

a lot of places where you can minimize the usage of cps to make gameplay cleaner

uncomfortable + you can die here like really easy because of spacing

sometimes it's just too much of cps on parts

Might skip something, but it's pretty much everything I wanted to say. Imo big potential mapper just wrong choose of map style. Yeah, some parts are outdated, oldschool and ddm**-style but atleast me would've enjoyed it, just spacing made it worser sadly. Even design is very cool and stylish.

Gotta say that Im not against small amount of spacing BUT if you are making this - parts should be comfortable to do. Yeah it still should be a challenge but not because of spacing but because of the parts actually be challenging. IMO the best map in this style is Aardvark - small amount of space but brainy-challenging and actually interesting parts.

Mention:

oh 😮

basically summarised as "need more diverse parts, balanced difficulty, ease of movement" maybe smth else but i'd focus on that for the time being

Your style is cool. If you make a more open map, I think it would be good.

SUBMIT FOR TEECLOUD !! 🇺🇸 🦅

dunno im thinking completely overhauling this one, like, completely making new parts. particularly between the big gores filler and the big fall

though definitely not right now maybe, i've got some other map ideas in my mind already... was just waiting for the verdict for this one to then start doing smth else

it's not about redoing it's about creating something new

it should still be possible to come revisit the old. and i have already told that this is not what i'd be doing rn...

absolutely, you can always revisit your old maps, rework them - and submit them again at any time

a decline does not always equal "we dont want to see this ever again", but simply that its currently in a state that we consider too much work to be done in a timely manner