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727KB

I don't like this bit

giving both players lasers and then insta taking them is pointless, especially when they have to get them back right after

I thought only 1 needs laser, but then this stopped me and I had to back

you have to wait whole 3 seconds here

also I don't like the way you have to get shotgun

• you can get stuck if you go afk or wait

you need only 1 totele in solo part

the shotgun feels awkward

this part feel way too tight for t0 and even for 2p

catching your teammate feels both hard and annoying

what is that for?

this timecp is way too far from start

I liked getting rocket

double grenade jump is too hard for novice

whatdahell is that; also very unpredictable for non-entities players

why use doors and switch when you can make a drag here?

these feel just awkwardly long to do(second one with weak)

switches again, ninja runs out in 15 seconds, you could give to to the player a bit after the beginning or make the "maze" easier and delete the shield+switch

I don't like the way of getting up here

I'd put solo earlier rather than here

too difficult for novice again

also you get spammed solo/unsolo everytime you fail this

this also feels too difficult for novice

just like with laser, you give rocket, then take it, then give it again

laser is not needed later, may lead to confusion

*this rocket is also unnecessary, you can use hookfly later

bot was mad bc you placed the last 8 as totele, not ctotele

what did you do here? I thought the map is >700kB, because there are blue images, but I *was wrong. Your map has to be optimized

and what is that for?

also you can skip no hammer by taking cp4 and going back

Mention:

i'm posting this on behalf of a friend i knew it might be a long shot, but i didn't want to discourage him, so i had to bite the bullet and submit it for him...

submit for teecloud ^^

he hopes to send it to the ddnet community...

teecloud its ddnet server but not oficial

Besides, I can't just accept the map because your friend wanted to post it. Novices are one of the most demanding categories nowadays because it's difficult to innovate in it.

Then why didn't you help him fix the map?

oh i know, totally understood, i wasn't asking for special treatment, just felt a bit awkward and wanted to clarify that i was just posting it for him

no hard feelings about the decline

im too lazy and i only know how to make fun map

It's not as if publishing a poor map would ruin your reputation. If Pipou posted a poor map and it was rejected, it wouldn't detract from the fact that he is an excellent mapper.