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Hope?

for what?

$decline

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bro

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what the hell do i do in the map

theres too much stuff going on my screen

grenade there hookable there teleport there freeze ther

like wtf

just play?

i dunno what to do

👀

i mean, that's a pretty basic combination of entities xd

have you tried grenading there, hooking there, teleport there, freeze there

unfreeze here for QoL

idk if u need to spam entities here to prevent ''cheat'', u can do much it much simplier and still requires to get speed into the edge

entities bug

kinda hard to see this refil jump icon on design

the original version of the part was without additional entities, they were added to make the part more difficult, not to counter the skip

in any case, it won't be difficult to fix this if necessary

desk?

part*

a okey

first of all, really nice work for your first map, but there are a lot problems and things which could be fixed. the screenshots are examples and there are more similar issues in the map which you will need to be looking for.

1. similar and not really interesting filler parts.
2. difficulty balancing of your map
3. lack of space

1. i would suggest to remove all the filler parts and rearrange existing parts + adding a smooth transition to them. you should get rid of those hammerfly parts and repetitive gores/rocket moves to make your map more interesting overall as at least 50% of it doesn't match the quality of your good parts.

2. some parts are really long and some of them contain more edgehooks than other parts. you should take a look on all your parts and balance them as much as you can. also i believe that killtiles dont fit into your map, rather as deco, because your map is not faily overall. so you should get rid of them.

3. parts will need to be optimized to be played smooth and to not feel restricted in some way. overall you did a good job already, but there is always some things which could be improved.

sadly this is a decline but it will be a huge step forward and imo a good increase of quality if you manage to fix all the issues in a fully reworked version of this map. i will also point out parts which i believe are good and have more potential so i hope you will keep it up (and not quit the game as you said xD)

Can I work on the same map and send it back for testing?

some things you should look for next time so that these don't happen anymore

if thats possible for you. imo i would remove fillers/flys/gores as mentioned and rearrange parts to make it all look clean and have more space to work around to map new stuff and to not be restricted to a certain space

Your map submission has been declined.

everything that wasn't included in the screenshots was generally done well?

screenshots are examples of the mentioned issues and the issues occure in many other parts as well

I think these are good parts and i think some of them can be improved more if you fix the issues.

Decline

bo

no

too bad

why bad

map is nice

im telling too bad to basicaly guy

i rly like this map, sad is getting decline

design and parts are cool

i dont rly think its a decline, more like hard waiting, sadge

I also liked the map, but killtiles are superfluous

considering a lot of rly rly bad maps were declined so fast, and looking at this map getting declined so fast aswel by being by far the way better map from all of this garbage that we witnessed, is just unfair

Dekael im with you this map is way above every other "first" map we have seen in the last few weeks but it still isnt in a releaseable position

but this map is easilly fixable, mapper was able to make all of this, so he is able for fuckin sure to fix all the problems

especially this map is 2p forced so u dont care about any t0 cheats etc

freeharakiri

freeharakiri

Json just posted like 30-40 screenshots and this map isnt even that long

You take whats good and start a new map

some screenshots are fixed in 5 minutes

A new start is often better than just making it somehow work

But, it's a good position

u are right

mapper is trying to fix all the issues and im happy to test it again when he posts it. lets wait :D

the time it takes to decline is not determined by the map quality. sometimes there are close cases which take some time.

harakiri will return

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