https://ddnet.tw/testmaps/?map=ezmap4u

too long and boring for beginning

design is not good

everything is too bright my eyes hurt

why dont put cp there?

u dont have to spam the unfreeze icon, doesnt look good

put a brighter layer of white freeze behind the icons

and you used the same design for undeep in some places

make sure to not use different design techniques

this jetpack is hard for the map imo

make more space

4min map too long? LUL

what?

ahhh you only the part on its own you posted?

yea

i thought you mean whole map xD

thats not how you make this look better

undeep barely visible

make it slightly smaller

theres no need for 3 layers of that xD

shields to there

make this room bigger or even let them be outside the map

why is there freeze under the tele?

just put shields at the end of the part so rocket is not cheatable get rid of stoppers

at places where u get your mate throught the deep make them bigger

annoying to hook them out from there with weak

and i think you dont need these

map looks pretty hard

hardmap4u

I think the map is 2 hard for novice and needs a design update. If you both rework it well I think i could be a good novice map (Some parts are a bit boring, get a bit more creative). Pay attention to tight parts which are just annoying. Furthermore there are design bugs even with that simple design. Since there is a lot to do, I will decline the map for now, you can submit it again if the design is better (for example: dont just use squre freeze blocks) and gameplay is less hard (for novice) and annoying.

$decline