"Greatness" by yo bitch
Big map
nice map
visible improvement to your last map (if I remember correctly), but needs some serious polishing. you should work on having a better structure, more space between parts and more space in general. some parts have cool ideas, others look like random stuff you quickly added to fill space. some parts are repetitive but that's a minor issue for now. also, some parts don't really work well. before submitting a map here, you should make sure that everything works flawless, try to have parts as best as they can be. I think it makes more sense to build a new map rather than trying to fix this one. (adding more space basically every will kinda go wrong)
background shouldn't be hd
these are just examples
the best advice I can give is to look at already released maps to see what makes up a good map
and too fix the space problem, rather have too much space than not enough
reducing space in the end is always easy, adding more space is hard 😛
$decline
please ask if you have any questions
also another advice, make sure that you really have fun playing your parts, without super
you almost didnt change anything at all, with these changes it still unreleasable map, making everything tight is bad way to make parts more harder or failer, some drag parts is cool idea, but rest is just annoying to do, part difficult jumping very high from part to part, fillers also very bad, you can look at "Exhale" map for understand what is good fillers parts, and as jao said make sure that you really have fun playing your parts without super
i think map is unfixable because u fucked up on structure
ye I don't really see improvements either
"...needs some serious polishing. you should work on having a better structure, more space between parts and more space in general."
trying yourself on a new map and making it good based on the given feedback is easier than trying to fix a bad map
yeah i think u shouldn't try to fix this one
so, better start a new one
just keep the parts u prefer and start a new one with thoses
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xd
there is a put with a bug